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Love Me, Want me
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Love Me, Want me |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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Love me with all your heart Want me with all your mind When you call I will listen When you beckon I will come Protect me as you would protect yourself Guard me jealously so I know I am yours Respect me from afar Worship me up close Take me as your own Leave me when I ask Make me blissfully happy all my life Fall in love all over again every new morn’. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I wish for this happiness to come true for you forever and that you will fall in love with your love all over again everyday with joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What more could anyone want |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
 This is wonderful sweetie, the beauty of your words pales only before the beauty of your soul.  Andrew "The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down" |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Isn't that what we all want? This is lovely, Rhonda. Michael Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very beautiful. ((Skyfire)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautifully written...I especially enjoyed the last line....that is perfect! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Rhonda! This is just what we would all want...someone to fall in love with us once again every morning. Enjoyed. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great poem. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How well the heart speaks. Nice Write. ThisDiamond |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Skyfire darling heart, this is without doubt one of your utter best it is utterly wonderful, as are you, How stunning is this poem darling heart the flow is divine all the way through As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Skyfire, What? You want perfection too?! And guess what...I hope you get it. Excellent write. Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Fall in love all over again every new morn." James |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Sky, Sky, Sky.... Why oh why didn't you tell me you were posting in open now? How much have I missed?  I love the peom. Full of yearning yet happy intrigue. Wonderfully done. ~ Titus Will I ever forget what happened today? |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Sound great we all need a dose of this.. Great write bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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