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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-03-10 10:14 AM



Upon the rose of lips I touch
as eyes of yearn do call
for in the mome’ of softest clutch
the form of tear does fall

As tear does fall I bide adieu
to ride into the night
With thoughts of love for one love true
as hearts entwine in flight.

In dreams of sleep my spirit flies
to waiting arms of thee
For if my heart is pierced and dies
in slumber life I’ll be

A dream of love, and passion true
shall come to you each day
Tis all of this I leave to you
as life is taken away

I love now thee as I ever will
for thee art truly fine
And when lone heart in beat is still
My life for thee is thine.

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-10 10:33 AM



YES!

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2 posted 2002-03-10 10:33 AM


oh i love this Barry..truly beautiful..

             ~Vic

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3 posted 2002-03-10 10:36 AM


In dreams of sleep my spirit flies
to waiting arms of thee
For if my heart is pierced and dies
in slumber life I’ll be

Love this verse, Magnus.  Makes me want to go back to bed!  lol

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4 posted 2002-03-10 10:40 AM


Dreamy!
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5 posted 2002-03-10 11:23 AM




(smiles) Oh Barry, this is soooooooo beautiful, I too feel like I just want to go back to ebd and take a nap so I can dream of my love and feel her heartbeat to mine in vision! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-03-10 11:28 AM


....WONDERFUL !!....

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

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7 posted 2002-03-10 11:36 AM


Magnus Oh my stars how utterly utterly wonderful is this write of yours. Utterly utterly one of your utter best.

YOU darling boy are a writer a really fabulous writer I love it.

I’m stunned into silence this is soooooooo brilliant, this really IS writing pas excellence


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (03-10-2002 01:08 PM).]

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8 posted 2002-03-10 04:44 PM


KJ///Guess YES! means you like this one..
goood...that feels nice...thank you..

Vic...I know you enjoy this style or genre..
thanx much!!

Duncan...Now I lay me down to sleep....
Yawn!.....thank you..pleased you liked!

Amusemi.....Your welcome and thank you!!

Noah....is today and day for dreams??  I
think you would love to be dreaming of your
love....

Nancy...Yep Yep Yep!!!

Mushy...you are making me blush...flattering
me so...BUT I LOVE IT!!!!!

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