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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Flashback freeze frame life paused in historic scrawl instant remember heart recall Rain falls softly in between each drop fall your whispers are heard in rewind playback stall The music of yesterday holds me in silent enthrall recollecting each detail no matter how small Reminiscing prisoner through day’s dawning till nightfall loving you…..still loving you awaiting yet, emotion’s pall ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (02-16-2002 11:53 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, A simply lovely write. |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Susan - It is amazing how long we can hold onto lost love. This is one I definitely can relate to. Well done. Dave |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Susan, this is sooooooo hauntingly beautiful, I couldn't help but cry reading this thinking of holding lost loves memories, but deep down also knowing that everyone will find true love and will hold true happiness forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It can stop you in your tracks, sometimes. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - haunting is your words of this.. I don't know if things can ever be the same once lost. Peace be with you SEA... BC |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sad but peaceful somehow. Sort of like a gray rainy day! Well done, you created the mood for your words to live in!  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, Another wonderful read Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed the read, but reliving those flashbacks isn't always enjoyable for the person in the picture. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You no longer need a teacher...you are becoming one... See me smiling? |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
~Reminiscing prisoner through day’s dawning till nightfall loving you…..still loving you awaiting yet, emotion’s pall~ a prisoner of love..so true Sea..enjoyed your words.. nicely done~Vic "Silence is a friend who |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so awesomely beautiful, Sue... I salute you  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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