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The Strange Vase
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The Strange Vase |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Mysterious vase of midnight blue, it intrigues Pristine whitecaps gather around in a blotchy pattern An odd shape for a vase... a vertical sea-storm of rolling waves In and out, it ebbs and flows Strangely, it disturbs and mesmerizes This rollicking twister with it's liquid heart It gives the strong impression of wild thrashing movement even as it is eerily still So dark and deeply profound is the coloring Yet, as light plays across the softly rounded curves it shimmers with a shallow, translucent vitality What a curious object this vase is... this watery cyclone spirit encased in glass. |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
What imagery your words paint...what mystery you verse spell weaves.... Beautiful !!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is beautiful, sweet friend, ooohhhhh...I just love your dazzling imagery, your wonderful words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And do you also collect paperweights...I would think you do, judging from this...there is something so strange about glass...mercurial and magical... ah yes, this one likes me.... |
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