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Wenches in Threes
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Wenches in Threes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Upon the stone of wall up high three wenches wait to be caught in the softest breath of sigh as knight of bold doth plea. From night of love when three conspire to pour hot oil ‘pon one For love of one wilt not desire lest thee doth let be fun. Mine heart does tug to fill the yearn of wench’s love of me Canst thee not know that hot fires burn for not just one, but three. My quest is long, the ride is rough as war does take it’s tide as one is much and three is tough for this one knight to hide. Thy oil wilt spill upon the loin of knight in scorn from three as loud boos are heard from the groin of castle down to me. Again I leave in search of love of yet another wench As garbage falls from high above turns me into a stench Farewell my loves I leave behind in sorrow my heart leaves For love of thee I’ll ‘gain not find in ones, or twos....or threes |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
And I thought Larry C was greedy for dreaming about holding 20 warm buns! LOL, a good one Magnus. Now, besides Queen Wench Marsha, who are these other wenches you've been sneaking around with?? |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*chuckles* Enjoyed reading this and the comment made above.. *smiles* ~Tier |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Wow, your visions are always so delightful to read, sweet friend, I can see the wonderful inspiration in this from Marsha! (big hugggsssss) This is a fabulous and haunting vision, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
MidNiteSun, I got such a chuckle from Marsha's poem about a wench....I had to do it...could not resist... Thanx |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tier.... Thee know the wench of one yet not thy wench of two For written with such fun A "three" will come to do. Thanx.... I did enjoy writing this... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah, I had to put a little bit of humor into something today...and I decided this would be my little piece of laughter... Thanx my friend... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I do love this...and I want to be a wicked wanton wench! *come to think of it.....I am one!* Good one Barry! Hugs. ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OK Nancy....you are number two wench... NOW....if only it can be figured out who is number three.....???? Pleased that you enjoyed this... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I love the word Wench LOL I've been called that for many yrs. Connie [This message has been edited by Zinsser (03-09-2002 02:37 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Connie, thanx....in truth, I don't feel wench is appropriate for any lady....They deserve far better....Back in the days... was a common term... We have grown up a little, but perhaps only a little... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
WooooW! (She says with verve and eyes wide) This is wonderful. Ya know, when ya got it... Excellent, excellent work. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This Diamond, WOW! thanx for the very wonderful and enthusiastic response... Pleases me that I can give you or any reader that feeling.... |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Magnus Hi there mum will love this, there really is only the One Wench ask Dave he’ll tell you. This is really good I like this. I like it a lot. Mum and Auntie Kethp, my aunt of heart, used to have something called the wench poems, long ago, they were their fun writes   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Krissy, thank you and I hope you Mum does not mind this...Just a lighthearted piece of poetry...thanx again.. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful, YES Wenches Rule A great piece of fun, I’ve missed having someone to duel with. Keth won’t do it any more she said I kept beating her hands down. Do you want another one? I can write Wench poems quite happily. All you need is a bit of fire and some of me and there you are a real live wench Fabulous writing darling boy utterly fabulous As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (03-09-2002 08:08 PM).] |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Magnus... just wanted you to know that is NEVER said in disrespect : ) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy.....being the resident wench, you certainly would be the expert of this subject...PLEASED you enjoyed this.. Thank You... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Connie, by no means would I imply that the word were ever used disrespectfully to you.. Yes, between two in love, it certainly could be a teasing way of expressing love...I would certainly consider it to be... Thanx Connie... |
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