Open Poetry #19 |
Abilene |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
The Chisholm Trail is three states long, It's rivers wide with currents strong, Ridin' drag from dawn's first light, Eatin' dust 'til come of night. Then one last mile to Abilene, The purtiest sight I'd ever seen, Rode into town with setting sun, With whoop and holler, my ride was done. I got my pay, walked down the street, To find a drink, no time to eat, Through swinging doors, up to the bar, Surveyed the room for silver star. Off to my right a faded rose Looked up and down my dusty clothes, "You with the herd?" the woman said, I answered, "Yep," with nod of head. Off to my side a stranger rough, Snarled "Cowboys stink, you ain't so tough." I took a drink of rot-gut whiskey, Said to the stranger, "That's kind of risky." "If I were you, I'd apologize," As stared into his drunken eyes. The gol-durned fool, he made a play, Reached for his gun, what can I say. It might of been that he was quicker, Except perhaps, but for the liquor, Shots rang out, he hit the floor, He wasn't talkin' anymore. As I sat in Hickock's jail, I wished I'd been back on the trail, Eatin' dust 'neath blazin sun, But I had shot the mayor's son. No need for trial, I had no friend, In Abilene at long trail's end. Long horn cattle are mighty mean, But not as mean, as Abilene. Out on the plains, the coyotes sung, Next day I died, when I was hung, I heard the call of boot hill’s beckon, And that’s my tale, I’m done I reckon. [This message has been edited by Tim (03-09-2002 02:11 PM).] |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is a very powerful poem. Life can hand us a cruel fate just like that. sky |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Wow, this is such a wonderful portrayal of wild western life in the past, sweet friend, I couldn't help but cry thinking of this fate that cruelly hurt many! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is tooo cool : ) enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very good! You and my boss would get along fine! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I reckon you'd best NOT be done... Your thematic pieces are wonderful.. More, please?.. |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Sad, indeed...but, nicely told tale. |
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