The Warmth of Red - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2002-03-08 01:38 PM

The Warmth of Red

Feet.
Ten toes sticking out from under the covers.
Five white, five painted red…
funny, how they share the same bed.
If I were those white ones,
looking so naked against those lovely red ones,
I’d quiver in anticipation – yes, just like that!
I’d slowly move closer, don’t want to rush,
and closer still, pausing for effect,
then gently, ever so slightly, I’d touch…and hold -
that position long moments or more – feeling,
only feeling, the warmth of red.

wesley james beard, jr.
© march 2002

[This message has been edited by jwesley (03-08-2002 01:42 PM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-03-08 01:44 PM

This made my toes warmer. Thank you. I love your perspective.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2002-03-08 01:48 PM

A warm image, indeed!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-03-08 02:04 PM

socks. . . yes. . .

well done Sir. . .

--------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-03-08 02:05 PM

They wouldnt be my feet because mine never stick out from under the covers ha..even in the summer..mine are always nice and cozy ha..enjoyed Jimmy..

~Victoria~

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-03-08 02:30 PM

Wesley darling boy Do you know how good this really is? I love the visions this gave me, utterly delightful I really do like this one

Absolutely perfectly wonderful writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-03-08 02:52 PM

*s
M

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-03-08 03:35 PM

This was so kool. loved it and oh yes, my feet are always cold. LOL. nice work Jimmy, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-03-08 03:56 PM

Jimmy, you have a warm and soft style of
romance...I enjoy reading it...Makes one
feel like they are in the room...

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

9 posted 2002-03-08 04:15 PM

The imagery is fine...but it tickled...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-03-08 04:41 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this one made my toes feel warmer and snug as though I was on the couch by the fireplace! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jimmy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2002-03-08 04:45 PM

Lovely thought in poetry, Jimmy. Enjoyed!

Carolina
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 224
Myrtle Beach, SC

12 posted 2002-03-08 04:46 PM

Maybelline and Loreal would probably love for you to help them with names for new colors!

I enjoyed this. It would be interesting to find out what feelings nail polish colors bring to men's minds.

Live today as if it's your last. Love today as if it's your first. Lisa

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

13 posted 2002-03-08 08:04 PM

jwesley,

Wow! This is great. A really neat poem! Love that color red on lips, fingernails and toenails. Also looks good on sweaters, skirts, dresses, gloves, hats and especially those dashing red cars. Wheeeeeee! There is no better color on a lady than red! It says, look at me I'm alive. Wheeeeeee!

I Love it!! Especially on five little toes.

((jwesley))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

14 posted 2002-03-08 08:20 PM

Ah Jimmy! Love painting my toenails red, especially for summer..
this one made my toes dance!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
is someone to wish for you.~

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

15 posted 2002-03-08 09:35 PM

"Red" must be either asleep or not ticklish.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.