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When The Time Comes
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When The Time Comes |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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~ When The Time Comes ~ When the time comes I’ll look back I’ll look up when my sky turns black Then my mind will take me to The time of now when my sky is blue I’ll recall the love that we now share Cling to the thought of you being there Then I’ll try not to dwell too long On how short was our love’s song When the time comes I’ll recall you I’ll clutch the gift of a love so true Hold the when of you here in me Feel the touch of our love’s certainty I’ll try not to weep or cry too much With longing for your sweetest touch Instead I’ll hold to the now of we I’ll keep inside heart’s memory When the time comes I’ll reminisce I’ll think on times filled with bliss Clasp to the joy rejecting pain Remember how we fed heat’s flame I’ll hold the thought of you in me Not moan or whine of tragedy When the time comes for you to go I’ll smile though it hurts me so Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This is so sad ...seems like sooner or later the time does come..for most..and we have to try and prepare ourselves for whatever the reason..very lovely words Marsha..hugs ~Victoria~ "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I think I'll save this, it is the way love should be held...if it must end. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Marsha, this is so very sad, I hope you really don't feel this way now and that the love you hold close to you now seems timeless in beauty! (kiss on chek) May heart goes out to you, sweet friend, this is so beautifully sad, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!     May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
It always seems to happen this way...even though we try so hard to not let it...or try even harder to accept it....sometimes it just doesn't.... Utterly beautiful Mushy!!!! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Marsha, darling girl, this is so very, very beautiful. Your poetry is awesome! And it just keeps getting better and better and better. And you know, Mushy, I really love your poetry, and I love you. May I answer with a bit of verse? In God there are no dimensions All true love is omniscient So I just want you now to know That though I came, you'll never say I went And every love that is true Is like my purest love for you So please just smile; enjoy your heart In God, You two need never, ever part. ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-08-2002 03:10 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Thank you everyone for reading this, I think it needs a few words of explanation. No matter how happy I am right now and I am, I really am, but recently it’s been brought home to me that time cannot be taken for granted. We are all mortal and sometimes we tend to forget that. This was to remind me that when the time comes as come it will that I should celebrate the love.  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Dear girl, don't you ever say you are not a poet. "Hold the when of you here in me Feel the touch of our love’s certainty I’ll try not to weep or cry too much With longing for your sweetest touch Instead I’ll hold to the now of we I’ll keep inside heart’s memory" Wonderful lines here, and great writing. floria Floria |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Now dear girl, I know what a black sky is all about, and you rise above that quite well... do go on now, and tell me another story, and make it bubble, for I have been told you do that quite well...bubble, that is. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I’ll hold the thought of you in me Not moan or whine of tragedy When the time comes for you to go I’ll smile though it hurts me so ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love this Marsha and it is true....life is so short...let us love one another while we may. Good write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Victoria darling girl thank you so very much I appreciate it, as I said before this was because it was brought to my attention that we are none of us immortal. So we should make hay while the sun shines.  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Duncan darling boy thank you so very much Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy I thank you for all you are you are a very special soul Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy thank you very muchly it is a sad thing but true everything does come to an end. Hopefully we realise in time to celebrate what we have when we have it Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy thank you very much that is a wonderful poem I thank you for it. I was just reminding myself to not put things off, and do them now Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Floria darling girl thank you muchly, that is a wonderful thing to say even if not accurate, I am a junior apprentice, very junior. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Soleil Noir darling girl thank you muchly, I’ll write bubbly Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Nancy darling girl thank you muchly yes we need to remember the good things Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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