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jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2002-03-07 10:29 PM

Bliss

Sensing perfect bliss
my lips quivering - waiting
such heaven on earth

w. james beard, jr.
(c) march 2002

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-07 10:31 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile! (sigh) May you forever hold your heaven on earth close to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jimmy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-07-2002 10:54 PM).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-03-07 10:49 PM

his sweet lips quiver
anticipating kisses
I can't wait to give

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-03-08 01:23 AM

Very nice...James

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-03-08 06:05 AM

yep, senryu....a good one. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2002-03-08 06:52 AM

Ah .... beautifully captured James, a wonderful Senryu.

Best wishes,
/Kit

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-03-08 12:07 PM

Wonderful senryu Jwesley, you did well on this one. Like a woman I am, I find it hard to say much in just a few words. LOL floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

amigo
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

7 posted 2002-03-08 01:22 PM

his quivering lips
awaiting a bliss
~ i better not miss ~

...the heavenly sight, i mean...nice write here, James...

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

8 posted 2002-03-08 10:24 PM

jwelsey,

You found the secret
to open a woman's heart
a pure honest kiss.

You are a wise man.

((jwesley))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

9 posted 2002-03-08 11:29 PM

I don't usually go for senryus, but I like this one. It was just... great! Thanks for the read!

Just don't fall in love with me and no one will get hurt

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

10 posted 2002-03-10 06:05 AM

i hope she was a good kisser..

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2002-03-10 09:04 AM

It sure is a senryu..and an excellent one too! Good stuff Jimmy.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
is someone to wish for you.~

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

12 posted 2002-03-10 11:40 AM

Sensual quivers
Effervesce with touching lips
A mutual gift

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2002-03-10 11:52 AM

Beautiful, Jimmy.
Sandra

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