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jwesley
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0 posted 2002-03-07 10:29 PM



Bliss

Sensing perfect bliss
my lips quivering - waiting
such heaven on earth

w. james beard, jr.
(c) march 2002

© Copyright 2002 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-03-07 10:31 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile! (sigh) May you forever hold your heaven on earth close to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jimmy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-07-2002 10:54 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-03-07 10:49 PM


his sweet lips quiver
anticipating kisses
I can't wait to give

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-03-08 01:23 AM


Very nice...James
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2002-03-08 06:05 AM


yep, senryu....a good one. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2002-03-08 06:52 AM


Ah .... beautifully captured James, a wonderful Senryu.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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6 posted 2002-03-08 12:07 PM


Wonderful senryu Jwesley, you did well on this one. Like a woman I am, I find it hard to say much in just a few words. LOL floria

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"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

amigo
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7 posted 2002-03-08 01:22 PM


his quivering lips
awaiting a bliss
~ i better not miss ~


...the heavenly sight, i mean...nice write here, James...

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8 posted 2002-03-08 10:24 PM


jwelsey,

You found the secret
to open a woman's heart
a pure honest kiss.

You are a wise man.

((jwesley))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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9 posted 2002-03-08 11:29 PM


I don't usually go for senryus, but I like this one. It was just... great! Thanks for the read!

Just don't fall in love with me and no one will get hurt

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10 posted 2002-03-10 06:05 AM


i hope she was a good kisser..
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11 posted 2002-03-10 09:04 AM


It sure is a senryu..and an excellent one too!  Good stuff Jimmy.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

Nan
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12 posted 2002-03-10 11:40 AM


Sensual quivers
Effervesce with touching lips
A mutual gift

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Beautiful, Jimmy.
Sandra

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