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A Fine Holiday
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A Fine Holiday |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A Fine Holiday reading poetry, reading rhyme, just a wee bit before bed time, saw a poet’s words of response, held aloft, a bit of taunt, he said that one poem would make for a fine holiday to see, well, to this my fine lad, I would say…. let be a poet’s mind is a holiday, a forever and a say, it mixes quick the words that flow, and with a stick, a wand, just so, it makes a day seem much more bright, or creates concern, or levies fight to fight for right, a cause, a score, a poet’s mind is forevermore so young poet, heed this plea, let all poets on holiday be, let all poets in their rhyme, find cause to cheer, or give just time, but let the poet be transfixed, by magic that comes swift and quick, by words that transform, by feelings that be, by moments in time, that’s poetry |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And you have very accurately stated just how it is when you are just that....a poet!! And YOU are just that... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love it, I love it, your gorgeous words always make me smile and shine with the beauty of a true poet, just as you always are to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! Oh my dear Lady....this is how I feel exactly! Wonderful...enjoyed. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Uh, ah, er....AMEN! Never quite thought of it that way...but it makes so - much - sense...when you explain it! Wonderful. jwesley |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...you make me smile awhile! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
As I sit here in a wide grin, I too will say that Lady you have made me smile "large"! ~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes, this is. . . what a unique presentation. . . making the lines fall as they did. . . not in strict "rhyme lines", but, following the thought as it went down the page. . . I like it!! ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Lady in White-- Was this written for me? The holiday gets better and better! This is a beautiful poem for all of us poets and poetry lovers. Very affirming! Shenachie |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're poetry, dear Lady...  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. It made me smile. Thank you for this. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling....here's to Christmas, Newyears, Valentines Day, St. Patricks Day, Easter, Memorial Day, Fourth of July, Labor Day, Halloween, And Thanksgiving every day of the year |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I'm certainly on a holiday. Are you? Yes, I believe you are. Nice work, Lady. Loved this piece!Michael Stars will shine when I am gone |
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