Open Poetry #19 |
Exposed |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
To think at times in raw intelligence: Defense And quickly to dismiss the mere irrelevance: No Sense To wonder of the outcome of the truth: Significance To wander in the crowd of thoughts aloof: Omnipotence And realize that being me is hard enough: Unconventional So difficult to figure out this selfish stuff: One-dimensional Attempting to bring betterment along: Mutuality To address the everlasting song: Immortality Finding what does matter after all: Successfully Sharing of these thoughts so beautiful: So Blissfully To accept the sweet more earnestly: Reposed To give up the veil that might cover me: Exposed Copyright Kkh 3/7/02 |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I do so enjoy the way you write... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I enjoyed the way that you put this all together....with the statement and then the defining word...YES, I do agree... exposed sums it all right up.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I just love the way you write, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, such expression and cadence is always exposed from your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Made a lot of sense to me TD. I think you did this very well and completely. Enjoyed mucho. jwesley |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I like this. Very well done. |
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