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Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

0 posted 2002-03-07 07:32 PM

Float Away

Placidly floating
On a current of remember
Drifting idly
Through a stream
Of dream
Calling to mind
The lost fragments
Of shadows kiss
Misty ripples
In the minds eye
Floats by

Meandering glide
On the wave of slumber
Wafting through
Seas of maybes
Summoning thought
Bought images
Of crystal light
Flowing into
Yesterdays tomorrow
Feel the sense
Of truth follow

Wander into
Nights of open wonder
Roam over
Oceans foam
Carry stars light
Shine their pure light
Into dark
Recess of thoughts
Dread
Then float away
Into tomorrow’s day

Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

1 posted 2002-03-07 07:42 PM

Placidly floating
On a current of remember

Gorgeous imagery, Krissy...
You are becoming quite a poet.
((hugs))

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (03-07-2002 07:42 PM).]

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-03-07 07:48 PM

Krissy, this is wonderful. Your poetry is awesome.
I love it. I love the images, the flow, and the rhymes.

As I float through Passions on my poetry sea
Swirling merrily in glee no reality
How wonderful and true that my skies are all blue
As sunshine warms my soul with a beautiful hue.

And so as I leave to go to bed and just dream
I'm contented ev'ry way like eating ice cream
For an angel has kissed me in her poetry
So I'll say good night and close my eyes so I'll see.

Krissy's poetry.

I love your poem, Krissy.

((Krissy))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-07-2002 07:50 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-03-07 07:59 PM

Krissy, did your mother make you do this? She didn't??? Why then, I was right...you DO have a talent and you ARE a poet and Passions is Very Lucky to have you among us...

Write More!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-03-07 08:12 PM

Krissy....said rather simply....I think what
Karilea said is right on target, you ARE
becoming quite a poet...with your own very
individual style...very pleasing to read...

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2002-03-07 08:51 PM

Quite pretty, Krissy, and I also echo Mangus' statements.

jwesley

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-03-07 10:14 PM

"Wander into
Nights of open wonder
Roam over
Oceans foam
Carry stars light
Shine their pure light
Into dark
Recess of thoughts
Dread
Then float away
Into tomorrow’s day"

(smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I couldn't agree with everyone else more, you are such a wonderful talented poet and I am so proud of you and delighted that you are here with us all and sharing all your beautiful heart has to say! (kiss on cheek) You are a delight to us all and we all love you so much, sweet friend, this is marvelous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2002-03-08 01:49 AM

Krissy,
See now...I have a problem with this poem. I must confess I have tried my hand at free verse and young lady:
You make this look too easy!

[This message has been edited by Larry C (03-08-2002 01:50 AM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-03-08 11:58 AM

Krissy dear. You are becoming quite the poet just like your mom. This is lovely, so well written.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2002-03-08 12:26 PM

SweetKrissy~

When you get caught up in that 'current of remember' ...
it can and will pull you further and further into your poetic style~

You are G R O W I N G and G L O W I N G ~
Love you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

10 posted 2002-03-15 09:26 PM

krissy,

wow darlin! this is just utterly
fantastic work...your writing is
growing leaps and bounds...sorry i missed
this gem first go round. i know you'll
accept my apologise. *smiles*

take care.
Amy

P.S...Loved it all but esp this

"Meandering glide
On the wave of slumber
Wafting through
Seas of maybes
Summoning thought
Bought images
Of crystal light
Flowing into
Yesterdays tomorrow
Feel the sense
Of truth follow"

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

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