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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Float Away Placidly floating On a current of remember Drifting idly Through a stream Of dream Calling to mind The lost fragments Of shadows kiss Misty ripples In the minds eye Floats by Meandering glide On the wave of slumber Wafting through Seas of maybes Summoning thought Bought images Of crystal light Flowing into Yesterdays tomorrow Feel the sense Of truth follow Wander into Nights of open wonder Roam over Oceans foam Carry stars light Shine their pure light Into dark Recess of thoughts Dread Then float away Into tomorrow’s day Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Placidly floating On a current of remember Gorgeous imagery, Krissy... You are becoming quite a poet. ((hugs))  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (03-07-2002 07:42 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Krissy, this is wonderful. Your poetry is awesome. I love it. I love the images, the flow, and the rhymes. As I float through Passions on my poetry sea Swirling merrily in glee no reality How wonderful and true that my skies are all blue As sunshine warms my soul with a beautiful hue. And so as I leave to go to bed and just dream I'm contented ev'ry way like eating ice cream For an angel has kissed me in her poetry So I'll say good night and close my eyes so I'll see. Krissy's poetry. I love your poem, Krissy. ((Krissy)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-07-2002 07:50 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Krissy, did your mother make you do this? She didn't??? Why then, I was right...you DO have a talent and you ARE a poet and Passions is Very Lucky to have you among us... Write More! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Krissy....said rather simply....I think what Karilea said is right on target, you ARE becoming quite a poet...with your own very individual style...very pleasing to read... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Quite pretty, Krissy, and I also echo Mangus' statements. jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Wander into Nights of open wonder Roam over Oceans foam Carry stars light Shine their pure light Into dark Recess of thoughts Dread Then float away Into tomorrow’s day"   (smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I couldn't agree with everyone else more, you are such a wonderful talented poet and I am so proud of you and delighted that you are here with us all and sharing all your beautiful heart has to say! (kiss on cheek) You are a delight to us all and we all love you so much, sweet friend, this is marvelous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Krissy, See now...I have a problem with this poem. I must confess I have tried my hand at free verse and young lady: You make this look too easy! [This message has been edited by Larry C (03-08-2002 01:50 AM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Krissy dear. You are becoming quite the poet just like your mom. This is lovely, so well written.  floriaFloria |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetKrissy~ When you get caught up in that 'current of remember' ... it can and will pull you further and further into your poetic style~ You are G R O W I N G and G L O W I N G ~ Love you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
krissy, wow darlin! this is just utterly fantastic work...your writing is growing leaps and bounds...sorry i missed this gem first go round. i know you'll accept my apologise. *smiles* take care. Amy P.S...Loved it all but esp this "Meandering glide On the wave of slumber Wafting through Seas of maybes Summoning thought Bought images Of crystal light Flowing into Yesterdays tomorrow Feel the sense Of truth follow" "you can't stop |
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