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Midnitesun

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0 posted 2002-02-16 02:21 AM

I'm forever stepping on eggshells.
At least, that's how it often seems.
Crunching, crushing Life along the way,
sometimes tearing it at the seams.
But each step takes me closer
to a mysterious beckoning place,
and all along the way I feel the
heartbeats of the human race.
I hear some crying in pain and suffering,
and see others laughing with carefree face.
But each step takes me deeper within
the heartbeat of the human race.
And it seems no matter which way I step
or upon which foot I might lead,
the steps that bring me into harmony
are the ones that guide me to care,
and to take heed of other's needs.
For caring about others
and sharing the inner soul
is not an unattainable goal.
The eggshells in the pathway
are just stepping stones
that are leading me
to the Whole.

Larry C

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1 posted 2002-02-16 02:29 AM

Midnitesun,
No yoke?! ROTFLMAO dor is rubbing off. I crack myself up. Excellent write!

Midnitesun

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2 posted 2002-02-16 02:36 AM

???????? OK, Humpty dumpty.

Marsha

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3 posted 2002-02-16 08:28 AM

Midnitesun darling girl, you know I’m going to say this is good, okay it’s much better than good, okay yes darling girl it’s excellent.

You are an absolutely fabulous writer I love the way you’ve constructed this. Well done darling heart as I’m said before YOU dear one are an excellent poet

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Sunshine

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4 posted 2002-02-16 08:34 AM

Doggone if I am not in tune with some of the wise poets surrounding me...this is twice I'm in tune with two of you! Good one on this...I sure do enjoy reading your work!

Kethry
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5 posted 2002-02-16 09:12 AM

Midnitesun,
I liked this, the feeling of treading carefully carries across well
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Wanda
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6 posted 2002-02-16 09:56 AM

Midnitesun; Now this is well written poetry. I enjoyed this immensely. Wanda

strbbux
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7 posted 2002-02-16 10:18 AM

"and sharing the inner soul" Now this is simply wonderful, and the above line says it all....love this so much Midnite, floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Greeneyes

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8 posted 2002-02-16 10:43 AM

Midnitesun~

You share your inner soul with grace....I admire that....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-16-2002 10:43 AM).]

kaile

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9 posted 2002-02-16 12:09 PM

Midnitesun,

i liked your title a lot..it practically pulled me to read this piece...

i must say that this was different from what i expected..i was expecting something about how life forever drags you down and how one must tread carefully, or else he would be dealt blows by Life again.

forgive my imagination

this was a good read nonetheless and i thought this was very inspirational sentiments...

Midnitesun

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10 posted 2002-02-16 12:32 PM

Thanks friends. I used to be afraid to share my inner thoughts, but this site has helped me overcome that extreme shyness. You have all given me so much encouragement that now I can't put down the pen for more than a few days at a time, and sharing seems to be so pleasantly natural.
Heng, I think many people would agree with what you said the POV the title suggested, as I would probably have read it that way myself in the past. I like to try and understand Life in 3D.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (02-16-2002 12:36 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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11 posted 2002-02-16 12:34 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh Wanda, you always write so wonderfully, this is so powerfully expressed and deep down I know there will come a day when each of us finds the true yolk of life and all the harmony and love our hearts desire! (kiss on cheek) Such wisdom flows from your quill, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Midnitesun

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12 posted 2002-02-16 12:44 PM

Eggshell hugs back to you Noah, from Kacy
(and probably Wanda too.)

Duncan
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13 posted 2002-02-16 01:33 PM

Personally, I'd rather be stepping on grapes. At least I may end up with wine. Eggshells, all you're gonna get are smelly feet. Wanda? No, doesn't fit ya. lol

Midnitesun

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14 posted 2002-02-16 01:37 PM

Duncan, you have me laughing now. It's too early for a glass of wine. Have you ever stomped grapes? You end up with purple feet. LOL, I think I'll stick to the eggs for breakfast, and maybe go make an omelette.

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15 posted 2002-02-16 04:15 PM

Midnitesun, this is simply awesome! A masterpiece for the book of wisdom.
((Midnitesun))
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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Midnitesun

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16 posted 2002-02-16 06:14 PM

Newell, I just might have to blush after your reply.

This one wrote itself in a way. The thoughts popped into my mind, and I just wrote them down. A couple of minor line adjustments and voila, a new poem.

Larry C

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17 posted 2002-02-17 10:18 PM

*bump*

JBaker515

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18 posted 2002-02-17 10:21 PM

wonderful.

Mysteria

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19 posted 2002-02-17 10:55 PM

Yes, they are just stepping stones to get to the "whole" so step away, great wisdom in this Kacy. Liked it a ton.

Live today like it was your last day on earth!
~* Don't know who said it but they were sure right *~

BluesSerenade
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20 posted 2002-02-17 11:16 PM

You've got such talent Midnitesun!
I loved the message in this,
the egg shells being the stepping
stones leading to the whole!!

*Bravo* Woman!!

Midnitesun

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21 posted 2002-02-17 11:45 PM

Hugs to you again, bumper car Larry

Sharon, thanks. Yes, I think I just might step on a few more.

Jeff, thank you sweet poet.
Blues, extra hugs to you. Thank you for your kindness. Now let's go step on some more eggshells.

Martie

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22 posted 2002-02-18 12:04 PM

Midnite--wonderful thoughts about life and direction. Much enjoyed!

Midnitesun

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23 posted 2002-02-18 12:13 PM

I am listening to "Peace on Earth" by U2 right now, one of my absolute favorite songs of all time.
Thank you, Martie. Peaceful hugs to you.

doreen peri
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24 posted 2002-02-18 01:12 AM

hey girl!! i walked on eggshells for so many years, i'm still picking up the fragments in the carpet!!! but this piece... this is really really cool!! you go from the negative of walking on eggshells and the crumbling of it all to not only picking up the pieces, but assembling them into reassurance, respect, insight, understanding.....

this is a fine piece of work and i loved the way you moved it from one level of struggle to the next, of love and appreciation and fruition!

i applaud you!

Midnitesun

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25 posted 2002-02-18 01:28 AM

Dor, I love your reply! You are so totally cool. (We should all dance on eggshells one of these nights, while serenity stirs up a cauldron of poetic inspiration maybe? It would be such fun!)

PearlsB4Swine
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26 posted 2002-02-18 08:34 AM

I like your courage. It has been my experience, that it is not worth the effort as those shells leave more cuts and bruises than some hearts can bear. But I was blessed by your hopefulness! Nice write.

Seymour Tabin
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27 posted 2002-02-18 08:39 AM

Midnitesun,
Well done this is a keeper.

Tracey
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28 posted 2002-02-18 11:43 PM

Yep, some days it feels like we can’t do anything right. I swear me and Dor were married to the same guy, because it also reminded me of life around my ex-husband…and the reason why he’s my ex!! But I’m now single again…yeah…freeeeeedooooom!!! I love it again!!! Lol.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Midnitesun

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29 posted 2002-02-18 11:53 PM

Pearls, there is always hope, and I believe each eggshell was put before me for a reason, not by coincidence or chance.

Sy, you made me happy with that reply. *sigh*

Tracey, LOL, have you and Dor compared the mugshots and assorted sordid details? Freedom, to choose again, is really a wonderful gift.

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