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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-03-07 03:46 PM

Incomplete
The rest of my soul
Searched for you
As I in façade of normalcy
Performed like street vendors monkey
To the tunes being played today.

Oblivious:
Repressing admittance to
Those facets of thought
Gnawing holes left vagaries growing
In unease,
diseased entirety.

Now I look in tin cup
For pittance of rewards knowing nothing
Replaces the brush of one heart against another
But hoping to sustain the struggle

Until I find you
Dancing on side street of living
To tunes played in now’s today,

Or you find me.

Are you looking?

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

1 posted 2002-03-07 03:57 PM

You never know when you will turn a corner and you just may find each other! Nicely said Cpat Hair!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2002-03-07 04:04 PM

I like the word play that's being use here Sir. . . makes it all the more interesting. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-03-07 04:12 PM

Now I look in tin cup
For pittance of rewards knowing nothing
Replaces the brush of one heart against another
But hoping to sustain the struggle

Until I find you
Dancing on side street of living
To tunes played in now’s today,

Or you find me.

Are you looking?

Damn, Ron...I wish I could write like this!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2002-03-07 04:17 PM

Dulcinea: Thank you for the nice comment, it is appreciated!

Sven: Glad you found in it something to enjoy..appreciate the comment sir!

Duncan: (chuckling) But you write as you write, not as I do...and you write so very well.. why wish for my pittance of eloquence when yours is so well developed?

Thanks you for the nice words...and the compliment Duncan.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-03-07 04:44 PM

(sigh) Sometimes it feels it is always in the last place you look! (smiles) May you turn the next corner and find all your heart desires, sweet friend, this is an excellent well-expressed piece, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-03-07 05:21 PM

maybe you should learn to play the accordion ha..

enjoyed Ron

~Victoria

[This message has been edited by Victoria (03-07-2002 05:22 PM).]

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

7 posted 2002-03-07 06:04 PM

gosh there seems to be a rash of lost soulmates...do you think we should put up posters...get everyone on the lookout?
just doesn't seem fair with so many looking, that there are still so many not finding...
wonderful work sir cpat

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-03-07 06:15 PM

Hi Ron

" nothing
Replaces the brush of one heart against another"

I am looking all the time for those my soul has known and loved. Thoughtful writing!

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