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Christopher
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0 posted 2002-03-07 02:19 PM



if I could see my way past the vagaries of dualistic impressionisms,
maybe chance would land me some rendering of clandestine immortality.
then, from behind that latent pedestal of perspicacious absolutes,
I could judge the antiphonies ostensibly meted out as approbation.
but sortition placed my perception much nearer the pews of mortality
than at the platform of a premeditated pantheon occluded by omnipotence.
so, the compromise devolves into the agonizing reality of nescience.

© Copyright 2002 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2002-03-07 02:24 PM


WOW!!!!How incredibly powerful...If you could and you did...BRAVO!!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Jamie
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2 posted 2002-03-08 12:27 PM


Representative thought is sometimes dyadic and often erratic. Clearing the mind is admirable in its ability to allow for much clearer and eventually more accurate realizations.

Thanks for explaining it so clearly.

J

Duncan
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3 posted 2002-03-08 12:40 PM


Yeah...what you said!  What language was that, anyway?
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-03-08 01:31 AM


Very nice...took me a while to read this...had to look up some words...James
Christopher
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5 posted 2002-03-08 11:32 AM


heh - no, jamie: my thoughts are ALWAYS erratic, sporadic, dyadic... you get the point - all these voices in my head won't let me go!!!

james - s'all good, thanks for readin'

duncan - it's the language of someone who wants to say something but doesn't want everyone to understand (basically just trying to be a pain)

startime... uhh... thanks, i think.

C

Poet deVine
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6 posted 2002-03-09 09:05 AM


Did you fall asleep with your audio dictionary still playing?

Aside from that, I think there is a lot of good stuff here - you just have to sit back, read it a couple of times and find the meaning of the words.

Silver Streak
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7 posted 2002-03-09 09:56 AM


Christopher,

Are you saying something like:

But making a chance decision placed my perception much nearer to the church seats of distinction between good and evil or right and wrong than at the raised horizontal surface of a considered beforehand knowledge of all the gods of a religion for which passage through is blocked by unlimited power.

So, I must I make accomodations, concessions which pass on and delegate to other people thus creating an agonizing actual ignorance?

Profound! Thanks for your thoughts.  

((Christopher))
-newell




Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-09-2002 11:18 AM).]

hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 2002-03-09 10:58 AM


Gets out her dictionary...oh, okay, that's what you said huh?
Severn
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9 posted 2002-03-11 05:01 PM


I'm in adjectivelised shock.

Sortition eh? My dictionary refused to open...it had a headache.

K

Christopher
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10 posted 2002-03-12 12:33 PM


hardly profound, just honey-coated - in all actuality what it says is that if i were a god (instead of The devil) then i'd be able to judge people. since i'm not, basically, i just have to cope.

k - heh glad i rubbed you (wrong) today.

sharon - do they have them on mp3 yet?

ruth - uhm... i keep meaning to write you - i will soon, promise! thanks for your confusion!


C

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