Open Poetry #19 |
Conquer The Night |
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Conquer The Night Waking I feel arms release me that held me close throughout the night I snuggle back not wanting free from these arms that hold me tight Drifting on passion dreams I wove I move to gently kiss your lips Embracing in paradise grove beneath the stars that moon eclipse Desire burns making my skin flush as I’m lost to feather light touch So real that warm flesh my lips brush while in vision to you I clutch I feel the warmth of your skin fade when reality invades thought My heart cries out as if betrayed by fantasy love that I sought Not wanting to conquer the night and enter into lonely day Waking moments become a fight that in my dream world I might stay Karen Torbiak 2002 © Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
let me dream of you I care not to awake now enjoying comfort Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
that's it....I'm taking a nap now....... love this |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Karen, I really like this I have a poem somewhat like this, but in another forum. Dreams can be so wonderful.. but sooo betraying. You have to wake up sometime huh? I enjoyed. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Karen, these lines send me to the stars: Desire burns making my skin flush as I’m lost to feather light touch I could write volumes of poetry about them. As I forever relish the sensual touch and feel of love's tender lips and fingertips. A language of ecstasy by itself. Thanks for sharing! ((Karen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Interloper embraced by the dream your touch so soft and tender I'll not awake soon SEA....me too but I have to go to work soon...*sigh* oh well I will just have to continue where I left off tonight... rosepetals25....yes..oh yes...dreams are wonderful...someday I hope some of my dreams will come true then I won't have such a feeling of betrayal every morning when I have to enter the real world...I am glad you liked it.. newell.... the sensual touch of feather light fingertips caresses the heart **loving hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (03-07-2002 02:21 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
startime, thanks for the dream share and the remember. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And conquer the night you will....Yet one more of your poetic masterpieces as only you, our dream weaver can pen... [This message has been edited by Magnus (03-07-2002 06:18 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh! I love the way you embrace the passion in this poem.mmmm..hugss ~Vic |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Karen I love this, "I snuggle back not wanting free from these arms that hold me tight" Sounds so cozy and loving, Great poem. floria Floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I feel the warmth of your skin fade when reality invades thought My heart cries out as if betrayed by fantasy love that I sought Love your romantic poems, Karen... always very special. ((hugs)) copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sweet dreams |
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