Open Poetry #19 |
Constricting Mo(u)rn |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Covers wrapped in anaconda grip from tossing the tumbles my breath came in gasps keeping pace with beat of panic heart I'd been there we talked a while about old times and you morphed back to a face of memory while deep inside I felt the rise of teen age lust Where did the rest of them come from? trampling through to disturb reveries with foxy eyes staring boldly and tongues like vipers hissing. You were gone again, and the grip of blankets had tightened the restrictions trapping me as I had traveled. No sleeping now... untangled I rose to let quieting heart feel the loss of another dream. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ron, this is definitely a time era I am living right now, I have been so lovesick over my dream girl and I yearn to first hold her hand and share true happiness with her and try not to be strangled by fate! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, this is a powerfully heartaching poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
untangled I rose to let quieting heart feel the loss of another dream. ================================ So often when I read poetry ... there will be that one line that just takes my breath...sometimes like a kick in the chest. felt this one Capt. well done poet sir...as always. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Enjoyed the read. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
viva Cpat well done, some real moves in this one |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Add another thanks to your growing pile of admiring readers... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Good morning Captain. As always your poems inspire... ~Tier |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I hate to wake up from the dreams I weave in my sleep....reality is so cold and lonely...Magnificent writing that I could feel even this morning as I woke to a world where dreams may never come true...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat I think you dream in Technicolor..such are your words that feel the dream real. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I like your dreams, Ron, and your poetry |
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