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of tree of wind |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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sometimes you play me like a guitar you strum me with your cold fingers I am taunt but you ignore my breaking sounds sometimes you sooth me with your breath breeze like whispers you kiss my limbs and between them you feel me tremble sometimes I forget I am a tree and you are the wind I call you god with drafty laughter you say I am silly ©Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have heard a tree sing in the wind...this is a Keeper write...and I'm glad it was among the first I saw today...the imagery was wonderful...thank you! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You know - I loved the first poem I read from you, and I love this one also...it's refreshing, and the brevity adds so much depth..nice clear images..a true pleasure to read..  K |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
this is an outstanding poem-- i really enjoyed it..and thanks for pointing it my way Kamla..  JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sunshine, thank you and I hope it blesses your day. Severn, thank you for your words, am so pleased you enjoyed it Jamie, thank you so much |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice imagery that I have come to expect when opening one of your works..tight, elusive in some ways...yet clear in its feel... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
most humble thanks Cpat |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ 'sometimes I forget I am a tree and you are the wind I call you god with drafty laughter you say I am silly' I adore the gentle familiarity of intimacy in this~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"sometimes I forget I am a tree and you are the wind I call you god with drafty laughter you say I am silly"  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo wonderful, sweet friend, I always love how you put imagery into your words, you always write passion so beautifully! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true gem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Marge, thank you so much for the read and comments Noah you are so kind thank you much |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello DS Wonderful, sensory original writing, as always, much enjoyed. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"sometimes you sooth me with your breath breeze like whispers you kiss my limbs and between them you feel me tremble" sometimes great write D |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
song carried high to treetops spread open to the sky the melody lingers as her limbs sigh answer to the wind Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Martie, thank you for the visit. SEA, it is a pleasure to have you look over my shoulder Indi, your replys are the poems that inspire the replys thank you |
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