Open Poetry #19 |
So eager to love-- We found each other |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
The waves crashed in the calling shore The wind blew soft The full moon reflected two silhouettes kissing among the shadows of the palm trees I tasted your salty lips and it tasted so sweet We were both seventeen on a summer trip Far away from home we found each other eager to love That was a long time ago and I still hold that thought of both of us kissing so tenderly in a far away shore |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Memories like that never die, walker...actually, they get better with age. Nicely expressed... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is the kind of memory I like to steep in.....how beautiful |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Trying to remember 17...hmmm. Oh yeah, that was fun! Good one, walker. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Walker darling girl this is an absolutely wonderful piece from you. I love memories like this. ‘Deer’s right if you’re lucky they get better with the years. Excellent writing Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I dream ever so much to meet my dream girl Joanna and finally touch the heart of true love, just as happily as this precious memory of yours! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may this true love forever sparkle in your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I tasted your salty lips and it tasted so sweet." Wonderful...James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such a wonderful memory to hold safe in your heart where you can take it out and feel it all over again whenever there are quiet moments...I love this one...Thank you for sharing it...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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