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Night Rain Falling |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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This night rain falls I feel the pull of you can’t stop the ache love flowing all the while still knowing my heart never said the words never felt them didn’t intend for them to ever be uttered as defiant puddles form fill to spilling rivulets dance in angry splash sounds reminding me of tears I still cry behind closed door clouds in my night sky chanting to your soul I never said good-bye ~SEA~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, Regret intensely expressed. I love the imagery which so effectively communicates your emotions here. Great write.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lots of emotions...you are reminding me...James |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, So aching.. wonderfully done Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"I never said good-bye" So sad... brings back memories... *hugs* Just don't fall in love with me and no one will get hurt |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
The aching and regret is so vivid here.I know of this well. Peaches |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Then perhaps you shouldn't say goodbye, Susan. Is your rain there yet, sweetie?  (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
SEA- I agree with Auguste. Maybe you shouldn't say Good-bye! This is very well-expressed! Shenachie |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
my heart never said the words never felt them didn’t intend for them to ever be uttered Susan I finally get it! lol This series from you has been different, filled with longing and regret of words unspoken. My space is so different these days, I was a bit blonder than usual in understanding. But tonight, I get it. None of us ever intends to say goodbye. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
like Duncan says, none of us ever intends to say goodbye...but when you can, it does bring some closure....the wonderings stop. *s M |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
tugs at my heartstrings Sea, lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Susan, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and your tears and everyone who feels this way and I pray that they can all say warmly goodbye before turning away and holding loves memories in their hearts and being proud for one another as dear friends when they each find new love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is so sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
aloha works for never making the door close all the way enjoyed it S |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Yes regrets Sea, I know about those. I like this comparing the rain to your tears. Nice work. floria Floria |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how I dislike goodbyes...even the thought now brings tears to my eyes....they always seem to leave something unsaid....Your heart rains with emotions in this poem and I easily felt it...**big big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Thank you, each of you so much....the rain started yesterday, and it is supposed to last through Friday it's a very mellowing rain, and I am actually enjoying it immensely....even if it does bring memories with it You are all so wonderful, thank you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I feel the pull of you can't stop the ache love flowing all the while still knowing my heart never said the words never felt them didn't intend for them to ever be uttered =========================== Hey...Duncan got it!!!!!  see the power of the ache .... it speaks volumes..and inspires great things in your pen. So it seems your saving grace was only saving face, |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
This is one of the reasons that I hate the rain when I'm alone. Well done. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea I understand this feeling you expressed so well. PS..your rain is headed this way. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is excellent, SEA... so very poignant. Rain and the sea do pull out the memories, don't they? *S* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling here... |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
These are some very strong emotions wrapped up in so deep a heartache ~sigh~ You expressed these very well, and elegantly. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I don't "do goodbye" and I felt this one. ~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Bravo!! Touching in all ways... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ This one pulls my heart out and flings it across the puddled chasms of silent goodbyes~ 'as defiant puddles form fill to spilling rivulets dance in angry splash sounds reminding me of tears I still cry' You touched me deeply, girl~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wonderful...& heartfelt. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Is it okay if I just say 'thank you'? This is exquisite! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue, beautiful words that show such sadness. I too, love the rain but it brings happy childhood memories for me. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Susan - My heart started to ache after this one.  Nicely done.Dave |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed it a lot |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love it. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dave....don't cry awwww dang.... thank you....everyone, thank you.... from my heart |
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