Open Poetry #19 |
Hopeless Romantic |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(My Joanna has been in the process of moving, and I have missed her so much; this is a thought of yearning I had on my mind, I guess I have been feeling so lovesick lately ) Hopeless Romantic By: Noah Eaton 3/5/02 I feel like a lovesick kitten Softly crying for your embrace I feel like I have a fever Waiting for your love to find my way I used to be alone on the streets Crawling in the cold rain I hid in the alley, disillusioned Whining for someone to take me home and erase my shame Then you found me there Crawling in the dumpster of broken dreams You pulled me out and hugged me by your shoulder Here is gone, but out there is a lovers destiny Now I am just a hopeless romantic Following my lodestar Wanting to touch your lips And share loves first kiss, wrapped in your arms Come to me, my dear Break me free of fates chains I want to purrrrrrr happily close to your heart I want to love you, my sweet angel, everyday [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-05-2002 09:46 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes sweet Noah! You are a hopeless romantic. But, I think most writers are. You will be just fine and back with your beloved Joanna in no time at all. ~Hugs Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
im sure she misses you too sweetie..its nice to have someone to miss...hugsss ~Victoria~ "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hang in there Noah...I am sure your love will return soon.... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ahh, this is so sweet. I’m sure she’ll be thrilled when she gets the chance to read it. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know when we find someone that honestly cares about us it makes a world of difference...James |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
do hope things stay well with you..you second half should return..and in the meantime..hopeless romantic, come on..where there is an earnest relationship there must be hope [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-05-2002 11:54 PM).] |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I'm sure she misses you as much as you miss her.You will soon be back in each other's arm, but until then here's lots of hugs. Peaches |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"I want to purrrrrrr happily close to your heart" So cute Noah! I love it! I hope that you get to talk to her again soon! Just don't fall in love with me and no one will get hurt |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
So sweet Noah I am so glad you found each other. love this sweet poem overflowing with love. floria Floria |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Noah, You always write so well, your heart is a waterfall of words cascading to delight us all. I hope your Joanna is back with you soon. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Noah, This is both sad and so very sweet. I'm sure she'll treasure this. Michael Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sweet Noah, I am sure that your beloved has longing thoughts for you as well. Very pretty indeed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah From one hopeless romantic to another, this was lovely. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You are indeed a hopeless romantic, Noah...and this poem is a true reflection of that...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Noah.. A sweetly hopeless romantic..... I loved the kitten idea..nice Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Noah - Very nice. By the way, did you take my advice and call that travel agent?lol Dave |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
my friend hang in there,your love will be there with you in time,you will be just fine. enjoy your read |
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