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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
MOON BEAM (A Candy Heart Poem) By: Noah Eaton 2/15/02 Waltz in the moon beams with me Under Eros's chandeliers Slip on your crystal slippers sweetly I'll lather you in the evenings starry tears We'll make love in these showers of moon beams Sipping through the jasmine night We'll climb pyramids of passion lovingly Embracing the soubrette cupid twilight Upon agate shores of our dreams We'll leave footprints behind of loves keepsakes As I rest with you on these sands of kersey Lying in loves hammock with you in the moon beams, in lovingly wake Come and dance with me in the moon beams May your honeyed words drip from your lips in amore Meet me in the moonlight, my darling We'll sway in heavenly kiss betwixt moonbeams galore [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-15-2002 11:29 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah I am at a loss to see that no one has commented on this beautifully romantic piece of writing. From one hopeless romantic to another, this was stunning! Take care......Sue Suetang |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
You succesfully write with great passion and depth of feeling. Like all the time! and i am envious! *smiles* Pass the mind-candy over heah! TSR |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Noah, You are sweeter than the candy hearts! Your love poems are full of passion, and I love each and every one of them.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Moonbeams....now this I can relate to, Noah. And this poem is overflowing with honeyed moonbeams and love.  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mm, I love moonbeams, and also your wonderful love poetry. Sandra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautifully sweet candied write here Noah Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"Slip on your crystal slippers sweetly I'll lather you in the evenings starry tears" Noah, these are some beautiful words here, a truly lovely poem. floria Floria |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Working on your imagery, I see! Good for you. More, please.... |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Noah - Very nice. Very nice indeed. Dave |
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