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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Touched by the moonlight of your smile your Venetian eyes linger for a while upon the kismet of a kiss in the night I surrender to inviting arms of love close to the destiny of your heart beating softly to sonatas of dark the waves of your voice entice me a whisper within a gondola for two drifting within the canals of passion Donatello gently sculptures our hearts olive tree breeze kindles the starlight I enjoy the sweet wineries of your lips lost within your al dente embrace and the sweet bouquet of your kiss "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the spirit of the Renaissance forever fill your heart and bring much love and romantic bliss to you forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Our lady of a thousand words to describe one simple thing...LOVE....nicely written Vic.. and BTW...thank you for not making me a swine....LOL... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh I love the idea of the gondola, always wanted to do that. lovely Victoria. floria I always chuckle when I type Victoria next to floria. WE RHYME..lol Floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
NOAH..thank you dear one hugss BARRY..thank you...and no you could never be a swine ha hugss FLORIA..thank you..ya know i never realized we rhymed..ha..thanks for telling me ha.. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is lovely, Victoria, as are all of your poems, my friend. *hugs*Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Michael..so glad you enjoyed ..and for bumping me back up ha..hugs ~Victoria "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
olive tree breeze kindles the starlight I enjoy the sweet wineries of your lips I found myself inhaling as I read these lines... I was that far away on the wings of your words. *S* This is beautiful. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Victoria. And, you used my favourite word...kismet! Honest! Hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
suthern..thank you so much...so glad you enjoyed suthern hugs nancy..i think that was the first time i have ever used the word kismet..nice to hear from you nancy hugs |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Do you just keep writing better and better? It seems so to me. Love this line "beating softly to sonatas of dark" Sandra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Victoria You most certainly have a way with words and this was so well written and so much enjoyed. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you sweet sandra...so nice of you to say hugss Sue...thank you so much my friend hugsss |
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