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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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right now, I am the words as you read them they have been written as they have been written you are reading them these words that are flowing across the page in lines old and new telling of feelings and emotions old and new these are who I am right now for this moment in time when the words are done that is when I am done for I am only the poem while the poem is being written when the poem is read I am it no longer you are --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
when the poem is read I am it no longer you are ---------------- Ah...Words...the person they draw in or out  Such an interesting thought-provoking and deep write. I'm enjoying this contemplative tendency in your poems lately.. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, I always find it magical how our words can be shared to others and how they can speak so dearly with us and have us feeling as if we are you! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And you are so right!!! Nice, Sir... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
when the words are done that is when I am done for I am only the poem while the poem is being written when the poem is read I am it no longer you are ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sven...I love this as I am especially drawn to poems that make me stop and think..this is wonderful! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
But Sven, you do live on in your poems. floriaFloria |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Cool Sven...I like that. Not many that surprises me at the end but this snuck up on me until the last moment. Very good! jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (03-05-2002 04:28 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The GR8 Voice of the Northlands pens another winner. Yes, you ARE! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is so well done, interesting. I like this idea. Sandra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
And only then to become the spirit of the poetry...immortal. Enjoyed ThisDiamond |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A transfusion of word...how delightful! Can you tell that I am very pleased that you wrote this!? |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Sven Hi there, Oh yes I like this a lot, its flow and language usage is very good. Very well written You are a fine writer   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Loved this, Sven... ~Tier |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Hum...goes full circle doesn't it? Good idea and thought here! Nicely done Sven! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Enchanted Melody, yes, they do seem to be thinking and wondering out loud don't they. . . thank you my friend. . . Noah, words do have that power. . . thank you. . . Magnus, thank you for that Sir. . . Nancy, thank you. . . I always try to get people to stop for a moment. . . glad that I was able to. . . floria, no. . . I don't live on. . . the words do my friend. . . thank you. . . jwesley, thank you my friend. . . I like to keep you guessing!! vandana, thank you for enjoying. . . Interloper, thank you oh Great Voice of the Southland. . . and so are you. . . Sandra, glad that you like the idea. . . just something that's been going through my head. . . ThisDiamond, yes. . .that's one way of looking at it. . . thank you. . . Sunshine, I can't tell. . . . . . thank you my friend. . .Krissy, thank you so much. . . those are wonderful words. . . Tier, thank you my friend. . . Dulcinea, from the mind, to the pen, to the spirit. . . and back to the mind. . .yes. . . it does. . . thank you. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Right now I'm here, then I'll be gone. Great thoughts. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hmm...Did I ever tell you what magic you have, Sir? Loved this. It makes me think. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - I've been away for a while as you know. But when I read your words my friend, you are still a master of them... BC |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a clever and profound write! Gawd, I love this; your writing always make me think and sigh in it's power. Your muse is talented, indeed...and what I wanna know is...will Sven ever let me borrow his pen? heheThis is definately a keeper! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like it! Maybe because of truth in it. [This message has been edited by passing shadows (04-05-2002 11:21 PM).] |
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