Open Poetry #19 |
{{{ Lady in Yellow }}} |
MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~*~ Lady in Yellow ~*~ Lady in Yellow Never think her mind is too shallow To see The dangers of your sea Hers is a color so bright The color of the sun In its glory day The color Of the hearts of many a flower And with that color Forever shining anew She knows How dangerous it is To give herself totally To you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thank you *Just another simple attempt with the ladies.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
This poem had alot of warm feeling to it.ENJOYED IT! Juanita |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I would say my friend. . . that there is nothing simple about your attempts. . . well done. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~North Carolina Girl I'm glad you enjoyed it.. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Sven My dear friend... Your words always make me happy and grateful for the encouraging support you give.. Thank you dearly... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always sunshine to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this poem brightens with so many smiles! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
An interesting series... leaving me to wonder how indeed one is painted one color or the other... I enjoyed! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Noah Your presence & words shines always shine sweetly and delight me... Thank you sweet friend ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Ron.. We can be all the colors of the rainbow...can't we? Thank you dearly for reading it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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