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Not Ready for the Rain to Leave
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Not Ready for the Rain to Leave |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Not Ready for the Rain to Leave Azure blue, so clear the sky today the sun, she's peeking in so bright but I think I'm missing some, the gray, and perhaps there's too much light I'm not ready for the rain to leave I need a reason for my heart so heavy it is difficult for me to believe I'd like dams to flood, to break this levy If a song comes on with sweet violin I feel the chills go across my soul the tears they fill and well within for a moment of feel, so old For I won't cry in the light of the sun and you can't get me to be the one to pull you down, nor make you frown no, I won't rain on your parading fun But I shall let your memory loose to go the way of you, if you choose I'm just not ready for the rain to leave for it would mask the way I grieve ~*~ 03/17/01 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"But I shall let your memory loose to go the way of you, if you choose I'm just not ready for the rain to leave for it would mask the way I grieve" seems I'm never ready for the rain to leave....  I like this very much |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If a song comes on with sweet violin I feel the chills go across my soul the tears they fill and well within for a moment of feel, so old ====================================== But I shall let your memory loose to go the way of you, if you choose I'm just not ready for the rain to leave for it would mask the way I grieve ======================================= Lady....you wear your heart on your sleeve and your tearfilled verses fall like cadenced rain. this is a bittersweet beauty. must be read aloud to do it justice. Love the way you carried out the theme. tis been too long since we read thy words. So it seems your saving grace was only saving face, |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"For I won't cry in the light of the sun and you can't get me to be the one to pull you down, nor make you frown no, I won't rain on your parading fun But I shall let your memory loose to go the way of you, if you choose I'm just not ready for the rain to leave for it would mask the way I grieve" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wonderful...and has touched my heart in many ways. I'm not ready for the rain to leave either... As always Lady in White your words are a pleasure to read..... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
But I shall let your memory loose to go the way of you, if you choose I'm just not ready for the rain to leave for it would mask the way I grieve hiding the grief...in the drop of cloud and mist... nicely done as always.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you tug lightly on the heart strings today dear Lady....I loved this, and need to put it into the treasure box....thank you again for a wonderful treasure. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-05-2002 11:49 AM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And with the rain do mingle tears from all the memories over the years and when the rains do once abate the memory goes on...though it is late.. Nicely written, sad, but very beautiful.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
water is the birth and the wash away of death rain the broom of new days I enjoyed our view on this |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
For I won't cry in the light of the sun and you can't get me to be the one to pull you down, nor make you frown no, I won't rain on your parading fun But I shall let your memory loose to go the way of you, if you choose I'm just not ready for the rain to leave for it would mask the way I grieve ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dear Lady, this is wonderful even though the sadness of words. I too love the rain, although perhaps for different reasons. Beautifully penned. ~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"If a song comes on with sweet violin I feel the chills go across my soul the tears they fill and well within for a moment of feel, so old For I won't cry in the light of the sun and you can't get me to be the one to pull you down, nor make you frown no, I won't rain on your parading fun But I shall let your memory loose to go the way of you, if you choose I'm just not ready for the rain to leave for it would mask the way I grieve"  (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I can understand how you feel and I hope you rid of all the memories that ache your heart but once you rid of them all, then let the rain stop feeling and may your heart shine with sunshine and flood you with hope of new happiness to fill you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
sadly beautiful - Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This sad poem really touched me. floria Floria |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Not the norm for you, Lady, though beautiful. I much prefer the happy Lady Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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