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The No Motion Dance
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The No Motion Dance |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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The No Motion Dance By Larry Chadwick My feet need an education, I want them to follow my heart. To hold you close in my embrace, Unwilling to let anything keep us apart. If music has the ability to make me cry, And give me desires I want you to know. Why can’t my feet follow my heart, Moving to express what I want to show? Those songs that put me in that mood, Sensing love as it was always meant to be. Rushing into the depths of my heart, Bursting out in goose bumps for all to see. Only one solution comes to my mind, Which I want to act on right here, right now. Let me hold you close while standing here, Even if my feet won’t move anyhow. March 4, 2002 Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Acting on your heart isn't always easy to do...but sometimes, it's well worth it. Go for it, Larry! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, Excellent advice I'm sure! Thanks. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I loved the concept behind this Larry! It's amazing how we "feel" music, and yet sometimes our feet just don't know how to interpret it. I love how you wove that into the sentiments behind this piece. Just terrific!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
So is it that you like the no motion dance better or that your feet need some lessons? *s you always write such witty yet tender poems. M |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Larry Hi there I like this, are you asking? If you’re asking then I’m dancing. This is written with such wit and so tenderly too. Get on the floor and dance with me I like this one I really do   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so sweet, dearest friend, I too love to dance all the time yet the music is so wonderful and enchanting I just can't follow to the beat, it's so magical to me! (smiles) May you forever dance with the love of your life happily, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ Could that be possible?? a no motion dance...see Id be telling the band to JAZZ it up....  I get what you are saying, and yeah it could be possible..Nice write..... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-05-2002 09:28 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kit, Thank you so much for sharing your response to this. The frustration of being a romantic that doesn't know how to dance is at times quite overwhelming. Your understanding is appreciated.  (what you did for me)M! THE true confession is that lessons would probably be a waste of money!  Oh well...thanks so much for your kind words. Krissy, I think I just described the only dance I know! LOL And doing that with you would probably not make your mother very happy. ROTFL Noah, You too?! Too bad. Oh well...thanks for the thoughts. Lauren, To dance or not? Your method is pretty intimidating you know. Thanks.Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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