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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-03-04 11:41 PM

To My Heart

How many times
have I told my sweetheart
that I loved her
and wanted her
in my arms forever.
How many times
shall she tell me
"You don't Know how
much I Love you.
I really love you
forever."

WrittenBy
JamesLee
and
HeyJin
March03
2002

© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved

Krissy
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Posts 556
kent England

1 posted 2002-03-05 07:02 AM

James Hi there this is really lovely, such a lilting feel to this one. An absolutely first class read. Well written James very well written

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-05 08:11 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully uplifting, sweet friend, I believe there is no feeling happier to hear a lover answer your hearts call and telling you he or she loves you too! (big hugggssssss) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2002-03-05 08:39 AM

May the times never cease James...however large the number, it's never unpleasant to hear. (As long as it's not empty words anyway)
jwesley

[This message has been edited by jwesley (03-05-2002 08:40 AM).]

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4 posted 2002-03-05 02:29 PM

not enough my friend. . . not enough. . .

well done. . .

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strbbux
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5 posted 2002-03-05 06:18 PM

Forever and ever until the end of time. Loving poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-03-05 06:24 PM

Forever is good

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-03-05 06:32 PM

James,
Well done.

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8 posted 2002-03-05 06:49 PM

How many times have I heard the exact same
words repeated from and to me...Nice James.

walker
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since 2001-02-11

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Florida

9 posted 2002-03-06 08:53 PM

Beautifully said

Kelley_Edwards
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since 2001-10-16

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USA

10 posted 2002-03-06 08:57 PM

This was simply elegant and to the point, a real slice of life.

Dulcinea
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IN

11 posted 2002-03-06 09:01 PM

I hope you never stop telling her! Beautiful sentiments we all enjoy anytime!

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