Open Poetry #19 |
Fishing for Faith of a Child |
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Infinity (In memory of Michelle) "God knows what infinity is." Faith from a four year old. I wish I was so sure. Do your colt legs race down streets of gold? Were you forced again through birth? Do you float somewhere in limbo? I ache to know what lies down death's dark halls, around the corner of this life just to see if God knows what infinity is. ______ 2-74 ------------------------- Fishing for Faith Underline in red the mistakes I've made, sliding under ropes that were meant to keep me out, listening to the truth of all this silence. Play me a song that covers and stills the noisy breath of my searching heart and opens the sky to the filiment of my questioning pole, to fish for truth in heaven's galaxy. ______- 3-01 [This message has been edited by Martie (03-04-2002 10:35 PM).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Martie...these were bigger than beautiful...I loved both...but adored the first. jwesley |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Martie ... such beautiful pondering. The imagery and phrasing as always, brings me into the depths of your thought. Very much enjoyed both of these delicate pieces. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martie, both of these are beautifully written. I do believe I like the first one best...but they are both excellent. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Martie, your words always touch my heart so deeply and have me thinking, this is a gorgeous dedication to Michelle, and I know she will never forget you and always cherish your love! (kiss on cheek) You are a true asngel, sweet friend, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-04-2002 11:03 PM).] |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Beautifully written Martie. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah Martie, I too would like some answers. I know I should accept the ones that are given but sometimes I too just want more. Hearthugs to you sweet lady. ~* If I made you "feel" anything at all today, that makes me smile *~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
These are beautiful, Martie... such incredible imagery. Both poems are written with a delicate pen, but pack such power. And you know a blonde's thought processes are always doubtful... mine more than most. *S* But the fact that you still question would indicate you believe answers are available... that IS faith. *S* |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like the two of these blending hope in God and in His infinite wisdom...for he was a fisher of man, and my dear... He has taught you very well... there is an answer for every question ever asked...the timing may be off, but it will always be in His time... thank you for the hearthugs, Martie...your writing always brings me back to earth, easily, quietly, with conviction... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling...Michelle taught you more in her short lifetime than 100 professors could have taught you in 20 years and she still continues to teach us with your poetry. The faith, the trust, the innocence of a child...something we all could stand to have. God bless you my friend Ruth |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Martie....this is very beautiful...I hope you find all of the answers... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Martie these tug at my heart so. I wish you peace, although sometimes I think there is no peace, just love and yearning. I am so happy you and I can write this out. God bless.floria Floria |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ 'Play me a song that covers and stills the noisy breath of my searching heart and opens the sky to the filiment of my questioning pole, to fish for truth in heaven's galaxy.' Such 'remembering' has surely yielded a big catch of my heart~ I love you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
Never accept what is given find the truth for yourself ask the questions and then test the depth of the answer given. If it does not ring true it is not true. No matter what you want to believe the truth is the truth. And faith is seen in all that is made around us. Art is not art for nothing. |
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