Open Poetry #19 |
Stricken Angel |
brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Stricken Angel I sit and weep in helplessness To see you in such pain I feel the sorrow in your heart The glint of calm you feign Downcast glance tells it all There’s no need for words Screams of the dying souls Forever will be heard I feel deep the pride you hold Of stars and stripes in palm I feel the fear you hide In these times of calm My tariff is in gifting peace To comfort any storm Yet in facing this tragic scene Of my duty I am torn I reach out to comfort you To hold you from despair But my heart too is halved Hence yours I can’t repair I mourn by your side my friend Praying pain’s reprieve Taking comfort against your arm Together as we grieve Brian Beaudry |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A truly heartfelt work. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Brian the ice sculpture is spectacular and your poem does it justice. This is a magnificent poem to go with it. Looks lovely. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, my heart goes to all who feel this way and I pray with all my heart their tears will be replaced with those of hope! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true angel, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing! May lovew and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Chris I thank you for your comment Floria, thanks for doing this post for me..Big Hugz!! Noah....you know how to make someone feel good my friend, never loose that gift!!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
First class, my man...and then some... jwesley |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Brian. I have this pic as well...as it has been making the rounds on the Internet, and now to see it with these wonderful words you have penned really does it justice. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
jwesley...thank you my friend for your warm comment Nancy, thank you for your comment...yes this pic is well known up north here, it was sculpted by a Mrs Racicot from South Porcupine Ont. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Brian you did an awsome job on this poem and I love it so much. floria Floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
awesome Bb....very much so...a tribute to our heroes.... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Brian Your words compliment this stunning image beautifully. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brian~ The ice-sculpt is awesome ... yet my heart melts at the tender poetic thoughts from you~ Bless you for reminding us all to remember~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* absolutely perfect and stunning in the way you have complete this magnificent sculpture with words that touch the heart...I love it, Brian....**big big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Brian, so good of you to do this. I think its something we all feel. Sandra |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I miss reading you around here.... ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow! I am so glad this came back up - enjoyed not only your wonderful poem but also the sculpture. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just finding a treasured memory... thank you, Brian. |
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