Open Poetry #19 |
{{{ The Lady in Brown}}} |
MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~*~ Lady in Brown ~*~ Lady in Brown Wears her own special crown The color of the earth Stripped from all it’s dresses Or green flowing tresses A color so mighty That you can see The strength in her eyes As she dares you to be The one who crosses her endless miles And gain her enchanting subtle smiles Lady in Brown Wrapped in the chocolate color you adore And like chocolate it melts away All pretentious closed doors And so you’d find yourself Sway Unable to say Why do like her chocolate so? Why do you act as if you don’t know? That chocolate has always gained its way Made all people surrender to it day by day ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thank you "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Interesting write.... i must admit I read this several times and each came to a different meaning in my mind... made me think, and I always like that... |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
I'm glad you think that way. It's always a pleasure and a privilege. Thank you my friend ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a unique look at a different color. . . you do these well my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile, I just love this wonderful series of yours! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Sven.. Dear friend.....thank you for your ever encouraging words. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Noah And your sweet words and delightful presence always make me smile.... Thank you sweet frien.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
To me...this is of our earth and all it's splendors that it gives us day after day... and like chocolate...we keep returning to what we enjoy...and I enjoyed this poem.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyEnchantedMelody~ Your thoughts are so delicately Crayola'd~ Beautiful .. beautiful~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melody, this is wonderful. I enjoyed it a lot. Sandra |
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