Dr. Love's Prescription for Ivy Rose ... thoughts from 9-11 ... Over inspired?

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-03-04 03:28 PM

Ivy Rose,
I don't know why your work took me to this place. It did, and I thank you for the inspiration.
~*~
His strong, bloodied fingers
~~~ fingers of hope.
His fingers removing debris
from 9-11 aftermath.His
body aching from the
bending and lifting,
this volunteer from
Massachusetts ... helping.
After a time he comes home
to you and redeploys
his fingers to the more
pleasant duty of pleasure.
Writing poetry of love
and devotion, exquisite
in its simplicity and truth.
Hesitantly handing it to you,
taking you in his arms,
crying, as he remembers,
and in his thankfulness
for you.Taking your hand,
entwining those raw fingers
in yours, drawing you to a
walk along the river, holding
on as though he might lose you.

And, holding you tightly
as he speaks, reverence in his voice,
of his love for you.Speaking
~~~~ love into living.

In response to:Your Amazing Fingers ...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (03-04-2002 04:02 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-03-04 03:34 PM

This is incredible! Much much more than a prescription...it would seem Ivy Rose brought something to the surface here, and it is most beautiful. Wonderful write!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-04 05:31 PM

BRAVO!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS INDEED A REMEDY OF SHEER LOVE AND HOPE, I LOVE IT!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) This is very emotionally powerful, sweet friend, I just know Ivy will love this just as we all do, this is a wonderful perscription! We all love you so much, sweet friend, BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

3 posted 2002-03-04 09:59 PM

Interloper...What an inspired prescription and a raw beauty that is seldom found in poems today. I Loved This!!!!!! It blends so perfectly with the fingers that were in my poem. I would call it a perfect match!!!!!

***Ivy Rose

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-03-05 11:57 AM

This is a powerful write, Sir, and you've taken your doctorial powers far and beyond the reach first intended...

I hope more will read this...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2002-03-05 02:23 PM

I hope you are happy, you made me cry!
ok, it was only because this is so completely tender and heartfelt.....
I LOVE THIS and I am keeping it here in the blue pages, and in my heart

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-03-05 08:26 PM

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-03-05 08:35 PM

I have to hand it to you...you went deep into
your inner self to write this poem...and it
shows very clearly a side of you that I am
amazed to see...as well as very pleased..

Thank You

SEA

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with you

8 posted 2002-03-06 12:13 PM

there are so many levels here....
I do think this is by far, your best poem

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

9 posted 2002-03-06 01:22 AM

This is so powerful and a geat prescription from the doctor.She has inspired you well.
Peaches

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

10 posted 2002-03-06 10:29 AM

Stunning...oh gosh..I have so missed your words....your talent for touching each of us in such a special way is amazing...*sigh* **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

11 posted 2002-03-06 12:13 PM

Interloper, I took deep breaths as I read this wonderful poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

12 posted 2002-03-06 01:23 PM

I sense these words were pulled from the deepest depths of your tender heart and soul. This is one of your very best poems. Thank you. And thank you, for constantly highlighting and shining light upon the gems of other poets.

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