Open Poetry #19 |
Love... |
Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
Love can come into your life like a speeding bullet and shatter your heart into millions of peices on the floor. which cannot be fixed Love is like a jigsaw puzzle that has many peices people give up on that puzzle until one day, you realize you didnt finish that puzzle. when it is finished, it makes a wonderful picture that tells a story. just like love Love is like grass, after you cut it, it always grows back. But when the roots are pulled the grass can be replanted. grass can die and never regrow just like love ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I dont like this poem, but someone told me to just post it..anyone else not like it? I was going to put it up on the teen board, but I didnt think it has naything to do with teens. So I put it here..what do YOU think? "Water Over Matter" |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Are you looking for a simple yes/no response? Or do you want me to go into detail? LOL If it's the former, then yes, but... If it's the latter, let me know and I'll finish that sentence. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hey girly, Well I liked it I liked the metaphors you used to describe the ways of love. Good Poem. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...how could anyone not like this beautiful piece? I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggsssss) I think these are wonderful, lovely metaphors of love, sweet friend, may sunshine forever shine in your heart and may the grass of your heart forever glow as green as an emerald with rich pur elove! (kis son cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lisa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
thank you for posting it enjoy your read |
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