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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-03-04 12:33 PM

Can you not see me?
I am there.
I am there
and I'm also everywhere.

I renew
I shine my light.
I shine my light
filling this world with bright.

Feel my touch
upon your face.
Upon your face
I leave a trace.

From my cup
you drink me in.
You drink me in
revitalizing life again.

Now if you
think you can.
Think you can
guess who I am?

(just an idea I was tossin around over lunch.
ok.....so using a format like this
write me a riddle!! This one is a very simple and easy one. Have fun,
the possibilities are endless!! btw* I am NOT the sunshine.......

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-04-2002 12:53 PM).]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-03-04 12:58 PM

could it possibly be God??? just my thoughts...

cute little riddle....may have to try one of these....

have a good day at work....

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-03-04 01:07 PM

Your really warm with that answer hon, but nope I didn't have that in mind quite. Hey, you have a good work day too....now off to work I go....(for now...lol..)

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2002-03-04 01:08 PM

the sun?

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-03-04 01:42 PM

it isn't sunshine, sunlight, nor is it the sun. Thanks for joining in.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-03-04 01:46 PM

Water, it's water? floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2002-03-04 03:09 PM

nope. was gonna give a hint, but I figure someone might guess it yet. I will say that Lauren is on somewhat the right track though..... We shall see....

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-04-2002 03:10 PM).]

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2002-03-04 04:11 PM

I'm guessing air...or the Holy Spirit? Good riddle challenge

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2002-03-04 04:58 PM

neither. Maybe I went to deep into my own thoughts for this one....hmmm...or maybe just how I might percieve it......hmmm....pondering now.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-03-04 08:00 PM

It is an angel. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-03-04 08:09 PM

(smiles) I too think it is an angel, this is such a wonderful riddle! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I'm not all that good at riddles but I'm going to give it a tru! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

11 posted 2002-03-04 09:10 PM

I vote for angel, too.
Sandra

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2002-03-05 06:18 AM

ok, it's not an angel either. Heres a hint, its not a person, it's a thing. For those of you who know me, this should be an easy one....we all have it, or at least I hope we do!! (there's your hint, no more...)

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-05-2002 11:46 AM).]

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