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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-03-04 11:18 AM

Of Snowflakes Falling,
The Time In Between

And would it be that way?
Angels falling like snowflakes
Gently down, to settle
Among earth

A formal dance
Of coldness and wind
Shifting skies,
Brilliant clouds,
Elegantly touching

Would you then hear the silence?
That which
We breathe in delicate
Manner, to let these moments
Spill their beauty
In a hunger only
The soul can know

Could we feel the same?
In endless light,
Grasping lonely time,
Reaching beyond
Extended whys,
Our being trying to comprehend

Do poets chant and swear?
If we feel, Do we then
Know the magic of starlight,
Arriving after dusk?
Will it take the path
Of a thousand footprints
To understand
The meaning

Go gently then,
Embrace the night
Continue to fall
In your soft walk
Among the earth
You taught me the meaning
Of love

Nothing can stay

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-04-2002 12:06 PM).]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-03-04 11:28 AM

Go gently then,
Embrace the night
Continue to fall
In your soft walk
Among the earth
You taught me the meaning
Of love

Nothing can stay

These are my fav lines, but this entire piece is so soft and touching. Your emotions put to perfection in words. Wonderful sweetie!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-03-04 11:29 AM

Would you then hear the silence?
That which
We breathe in delicate
Manner, to let these moments
Spill their beauty
In a hunger only
The soul can know
very nicely done!

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-03-04 11:30 AM

What a beautiful thought Laren, and since we have over ten inches of snow. Well, there are angels all over my lawn and roof. Thank you for this poem. It is delightful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

4 posted 2002-03-04 11:40 AM

The thought of this is softer than even the most quiet of down.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2002-03-04 11:45 AM

Lauren,
Haunting questions...begging answers. Each with our own thoughts. Well done.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2002-03-04 12:41 PM

Would you then hear the silence?
That which
We breathe in delicate
Manner, to let these moments
Spill their beauty
In a hunger only
The soul can know

Could we feel the same?
In endless light,
Grasping lonely time,
Reaching beyond
Extended whys,
Our being trying to comprehend
=====================================

Go gently then,
Embrace the night
Continue to fall
In your soft walk
Among the earth
You taught me the meaning
Of love
======================================

the title of "Feel" is most appropriate ...
for I do feel your words...and they are warm as morning sun and soft as butterfly wings.
this is exquisite poetess Lauren

So it seems your saving grace was only saving face,
you thought he was wanting you...
but he was only wanting you to let him off the hook.

~BNL~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-03-04 01:20 PM

Would you then hear the silence?
That which
We breathe in delicate
Manner, to let these moments
Spill their beauty
In a hunger only
The soul can know

Very beautiful, Loren!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2002-03-04 01:41 PM

beautiful words as always Lauren..so true some do not know the meaning of love..some are givers and others are takers...enjoyed hugss

~Vic

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2002-03-04 01:56 PM

the meaning is that nothing stays. . . hmmmm. . . I'm wondering about that. . .

what else can I do but wonder. . . you always seem to lead us to that place of wonderment Lauren. . . excellent. . .

----------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-03-04 05:45 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I have been so happy and lucky to see snowflakes flitter all along my front lawn last week, humming like angels in the morning! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautifully touching! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JAR
Junior Member

since 2001-11-06

Posts 34

11 posted 2002-03-04 11:31 PM

Sometimes I may not fully understand what the meaning might be, but I listen,
I am always in awe of your words,
though I may be a little bias

sitting on the curb just listening
JAR

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

12 posted 2002-03-04 11:40 PM

This was wonderful...and so was the graphic.

jwesley

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