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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-03-04 11:02 AM

Write Me A Love Poem

write me
a love poem
make it
all mine
one I
can read
till the end
of time
please this once
don’t use
disappearing ink
so I can be sure
when I read it
and its not
gone in a blink
use the thickest paper
to press
in the pages
of my heart
and for the end
of all time
your words
will never part

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2002-03-04 01:34 PM

h,
The poet's ultimate challenge, me thinks.
And if successful, his ultimate reward.
You do set high standards, Lady!
I'd best get to work . . .

e

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-03-04 01:45 PM

a wonderful thought...I don't think
I have ever had a love poem written to me,
at least not one that was meant for me only...
hope you receive the one you want.

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-04-2002 01:50 PM).]

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2002-03-04 01:46 PM

"You"

Yeah, yeah, I know, trite and irresponsible, but it's the shortest, sweetest love poem I know.

jwesley

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2002-03-04 01:52 PM

how could such a request be ignored???

wonderful helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2002-03-04 10:18 PM

Okay Slick, I tried for real this time...and posted it but the words eluded me...

jwesley

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-03-04 11:17 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile, may you rlove forever shower you with love poems! (kiss on cheek) I would always be happy to write a love poem, we all love you so much, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

7 posted 2002-03-04 11:23 PM

You do the most beautiful things with such few words. Lovely.

Nan

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

8 posted 2002-03-05 12:14 PM

I would
write you
a love poem,
if only
I was able,
no rhyme
of fancy,
no dreams,
nor fable,
just simple words
straight from
my heart,
to tell my
love,
she is
gods' art
that paints
the heavens
on my soul,
sweet passion's kiss
that makes me whole.
If only
I was able,
to write
what's
in my heart,
then til
the
end of evermore,
never
would
we
part.

Hope you don't mind my making a response. Your poem was truly lovely and a pleasure to read.

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