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Expressing Desire |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I searched for the words Knowing any found or shared Would in no way bridge the distance Between the reality of today And the images held in dream Still I searched Looking in the bottom of drawers Kept locked inside my heart Rummaging through the things left Folded in each for the syllables For the sounds It was forgone They could not roll from my tongue Or fly from fingers to grace a page In a way you would be moved To understand my needs Still I searched Hoping to find You |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat Some things are too big for words. Very frustrating for one who wants to say. Glad to see you here this morning. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Cpt Hair darling boy shall I just say something short like this is good writing? Noooooooooooo of course not, because it’s not good writing, it’s stunningly fabulous writing. YOU are a superb writer my friend. Fabulous writing and this is so descriptive so vivid in its image of someone searching for but not finding what they seek. Absolutely excellent    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written ron...the heart in search of a memory..enjoyed  ~Victoria~ "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Martie: Glad I could steal a few mintues to drop in and read...and always glad to find your postings for perusal, contemplation, and enjoyment. Thanks for the nice words... Sunshine: Yes... Marsha: You my dear frind are way too kind! But, I thank you for being so... Victoria: Thank you ma'am... nice of you to say so... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice write, Ron. I have felt this also, and you stated it eloquently. Sandra |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sandra: Thank you... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Still I searched Looking in the bottom of drawers Kept locked inside my heart Rummaging through the things left Folded in each for the syllables For the sounds ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Still I searched Hoping to find You ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I LOVE THIS POEM! ..and, I'm keeping it. Thanks Ron...great write. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, I think we can all relate to this feeling, sweet friend, I hope you find all your heart desires and you find loves memories and joys forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
..... beautiful..... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the search or finding the gift not sure which is the best enjoyed your work here |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
It was forgone They could not roll from my tongue Or fly from fingers to grace a page In a way you would be moved To understand my needs Still I searched Hoping to find You --------------------- When words are lost and we try hard to find them...put them down on papers... Oh, I just know the feeling too well and you have described it wonderfully... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow...your writing never ceases to amaze me, am glad I stopped by to read today...wonderful metaphors......sigh |
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