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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Of brass and the glass of inner reflections, Kaleidoscopic, those changes in years. Quiet wishes, unlock with each turn. In fragmented pieces, become verbal tears. Touching the warm, where it always takes two, next to the silence of thoughts on grief. Reflections stirred falling further away A glimpse of myself, beauty fades, disbelief. Somewhere a place, infinity resides. The saga of two willing hearts hope in time. She wanting He, of word gifts they share And when calm takes hold, both daydream in rhyme. Hazel eyes of mine, view no promises. Perhaps one kiss, off in silence beyond. I'm lost in you, in waves of loving My Someone, just.. for today please respond. Maureen IN abc order, thanks to the titles of: Aimster, catalinamoon, corinne, Cpat ctowen, desperado, doreenperi, ecrivan Greeneyes, Hope, janmew, JanetMarie, Marge, Marsha, Mysteria, Nan( and all others who used the "It Always Takes Two"), rw, Saxoness, SEA , Severn, 1slicklady, startime, Sunshine, Sven, Tim, Victoria, Zinsser "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-04-2002 01:17 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done as always hon...and just so happens you have hazel eyes too ha..hugss ~Vic "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
very very very COOL!! really cool! did i say yet i thought this was cool?  wow! very cool! hehe |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~M~ Wow for a minute I thought you were speaking of BOP..LOL thanks for including me in this wonderful write....It was a pleasure to read, as you craft your words in such a delicate manner..and always with your style..be well, peace to you...HUGS Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very well done. floria Floria |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
"Hazel eyes of mine, view no promises. Perhaps one kiss, off in silence beyond. I'm lost in you, in waves of loving My Someone, just.. for today please respond". Okay just for today  I'm responding..moving write, well written  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-04-2002 10:56 AM).] |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Excellently expressed Maureen , I am so pleased you found use of my "Fragmented Pieces ' Hope |
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quietwaters Junior Member
since 2002-02-04
Posts 30delray beach, florida |
"Of brass and the glass of inner reflections, Kaleidoscopic, those changes in years. Quiet wishes, unlock with each turn. In fragmented pieces, become verbal tears." maureen... the passage u were able to wrapped in words with an appreciable serenity, is one we often undergo, again and again. that u were able to do so...is, to me...very admirable... i only wish that i could *speak* in the same way..someday... ray... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~V~Yes I had to use your Hazel Eyes *s mostly everyone writes of the blue or green ones...thanks hugs M doreen...I thought you might get a kick out of this. I am a bit run down, too many poetic endeavors this weekend. But the time was on my hands and the titles were in front of me and fit my mood. Thank you for your offering. *s Lauren...At first I did use that title..but it didn't fit the bill and then I thought Re Titled worked for me *s thank you. ((hugs)) to you too M Floria, I tried my best to include as many as I could. My poem was beginning to be long. Next time, I will reach into your words *s thank you M Martin...thank you for being "My Someone" of the moment *s making me smile hugs M *by the way I couldn't keep up with your repetitious lettering..it drove me nuts just doing one at a time!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hope, it was your fragmented pieces and Kaleidoscopic by Regina that started my mind working *s Thank you for that hugs M quietwaters (Ray)... you give me much too much credit, the words existed for me to string together. *s I appreciate your kindness..and want you to know that your words have already *spoken* to me and inspired me and though I can do that easily, I choose my subjects very carefully. Your "someday" is close by...*w thank you again Maureen "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Hey, that was pretty slick! I just don't have the patience to do something like this...way cool! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It came easy and was fun to do when I don't have much inspiration or ideas. *S M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) This is such a beautiful and creative poem, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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