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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-03-04 02:36 AM

The is something about these recent nights
making me wonder if I ever really knew you.
Did your voice turn my heart inside out
the first time you said hello to me?
Did your laugh make me smile
and realize, in hindsight,
that I hadn't known a laugh as genuine as yours
for a very long time?
Nights without your ears to drink my sound
and fill your soul with the announcement of my love for you
makes things in life so much more difficult to bear.
I'm just down to not believing in my existence
as long as I don't have your magic to reassure me.
Perhaps that is why you're gone right now
so I can believe in myself without any help.
Darling, what a difficult task that is.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
There are dreams to be dreamt
but I sleep with restlessness
since your soft "I Love You"
isn't here to tuck me in.
There are moments to think of you
in AM hours when our moon
touches the magic of our love
and parades it before jealous stars,
but I make love to lonliness
in the absence of our long goodnights.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
How, in the madness of needing you
can I be so daring as to live normally?
To wake in the morning seems to take
a great amount of strength and nerve.
How, in the wake of desiring you,
can I even think of doing anything
but sitting on the edge of myself
in perfect composed wait for your return?
How guilty am I for going on doing the daily mundane
when there is so much "loving you"
that has to be done?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I know you
and because of that
I'm loving you
and because of that
my heart sings
and because of that
hope dances around me
and because of that
and all of this
I am afloat in adoration
both yours and my own.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-03-04 02:48 AM

How, in the madness of needing you
can I be so daring as to live normally?
To wake in the morning seems to take
a great amount of strength and nerve.
How, in the wake of desiring you,
can I even think of doing anything
but sitting on the edge of myself
in perfect composed wait for your return?
How guilty am I for going on doing the daily mundane
when there is so much "loving you"
that has to be done?

I was ready to go to sleep, then I read this.
Incredible!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-03-04 05:47 AM

Wonderful expression of your feelings...James

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-03-04 08:20 AM

There are moments to think of you
in AM hours when our moon
touches the magic of our love
and parades it before jealous stars,
but I make love to lonliness
in the absence of our long goodnights.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
How, in the madness of needing you
can I be so daring as to live normally?
To wake in the morning seems to take
a great amount of strength and nerve.
How, in the wake of desiring you,
can I even think of doing anything
but sitting on the edge of myself
in perfect composed wait for your return?
How guilty am I for going on doing the daily mundane
when there is so much "loving you"
that has to be done?
==============================

Certain lines in this impressive collection of expression, just went thru me...

"How, in the wake of desiring you,
can I even think of doing anything
but sitting on the edge of myself

that one took my breath away....for its content and its reflection,
So that was you in my mirror *L*
This Jenn girlie--tis much more than a "note."

very cool write Poetess T.
(love your new sig)

So it seems your saving grace was only saving face,
you thought he was wanting you...
but he was only wanting you to let him off the hook.

~BNL~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-03-04 10:43 AM

There are dreams to be dreamt
but I sleep with restlessness
since your soft "I Love You"
isn't here to tuck me in."

Ohhhhh Temp you have me with tears in my eyes..

...I adore this...and love the new styles you are trying out....I am keeping this....PEACE HUGS

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2002-03-04 11:11 AM

How, in the madness of needing you
can I be so daring as to live normally?
To wake in the morning seems to take
a great amount of strength and nerve.
How, in the wake of desiring you,
can I even think of doing anything
but sitting on the edge of myself
in perfect composed wait for your return?
How guilty am I for going on doing the daily mundane
when there is so much "loving you"
that has to be done?

wonderful phrasing throughout...and heartfelt in the emotions it conveys..excellent work my friend!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-03-04 02:14 PM

what can I say that hasn't already been said??

you reach down and find the depth of emotion. . . well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-03-04 04:09 PM

Well You certainly are not for a loss of
words...and you reached very deep within
yourself to write this...Lots of feelings
written...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-03-04 04:17 PM

Jenn, this is amazing! You reached right down in there and pulled these feelings out for us to see. Wonderfully penned. I am not even going to point out my favourite lines as it wouldn't do this piece justice. It should be read in it's entirety.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-04 06:00 PM

YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, every single word in this is pure poetic beauty, I too can't choose any favorites lines for this whole poem is a timeless classic! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a beautiful romantic ramble! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

10 posted 2002-03-04 08:47 PM

This are lovely love notes, you know I love the love thing

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

11 posted 2002-03-05 10:33 AM

Any a symphany in themselves

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

12 posted 2002-03-06 10:54 AM

These notes play very well. If they are heard.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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