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rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

0 posted 2002-03-03 10:02 PM

Through kaleidoscope
I see you close
many colors
I have for you

we are broken pieces
when apart
we are stained glass
making love strands
holding tight
to all we are

with nothing missing
but the sun

until we smile
at the same time
and touch

And when night comes
we are moon glazed opals
iridescent in haze

Crazy in cloud rifts
and purple water want

sighing mind spins
and laughing
in shadow secrets
tinged in blue

until morn bursts open
and I need you that way

behind me warm
so close, your pulse
is my own

just tasting the shards
all that is left of me
is yours

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-03-03 10:29 PM

Brilliant!
ThisDiamond

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2002-03-03 10:32 PM

Loved the changing colors and the way your words move.
Your poems are always so good and picturesque.
You are a brilliant poet in every sense of the word,
I only wish I could write like you do.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-03-2002 10:33 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-03 10:48 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always paint and fashion stained-glass images of majestic love and beauty, this is fabulous! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-03-2002 10:49 PM).]

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-03-03 11:02 PM

we are stained glass
making love strands
holding tight
to all we are

with nothing missing
but the sun
===============================
until morn bursts open
and I need you that way

behind me warm
so close, your pulse
is my own

just tasting the shards
all that is left of me
is yours
==================================

One thing is always constant when I read you--has been this way from the first read,
I always wish I could write like this...
BUT lately....I find myself wishing more so that I was INSPIRED LIKE THIS.

my goodness Poetess Regina...love suits your pen ... you wear it well my friend.
Kiss your muse dear...for he takes your poetry to sweeter level of *sigh*
mothy me

So it seems your saving grace was only saving face,
you thought he was wanting you...
but he was only wanting you to let him off the hook.

~BNL~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-03-04 06:01 AM

When we are so inspired, are muses grace our words. Your muse most definately graces your words dear somy~ This was lovely

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2002-03-04 07:03 AM

"behind me warm
so close, your pulse
is my own"

Excellent phrasing throughout Regina ... beautiful imagery, very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

7 posted 2002-03-04 07:39 AM

Dear Regina, here you have created your own pot of gold with the many colours of your mood and feelings, you have gathered all the different lights and shone a beam of love filled emotion which we all can feel. You have yet again created a picture of enlightment which we will all try to find in our Kaleidoscopic of life and events.
You sound very happy and content, may you be forever.
Loved the write.

Sincerely Rick

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2002-03-04 07:43 AM

would shake
the pieces
til they formed
a fragile heart

lovely work ms wood

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

9 posted 2002-03-04 11:34 AM

Regina,

very very lovely indeed....

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2002-03-04 11:52 AM

Very interesting, lovely and unique imagery, my friend. *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

11 posted 2002-03-04 11:58 AM

What a beautiful comparison to a kaleidocscope. nice one. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

12 posted 2002-03-04 12:27 PM

Reg,
I wish I could do this. These poems are always so awesome. I love how you paint with words. Awesome!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2002-03-04 01:24 PM

Regina

Touching, tender sensuous look into light. You turn feeling into words.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

14 posted 2002-03-04 01:36 PM

And he cooks while she write too! Oh Regina, this was simply lovely. Gotta love that man of yours I do, he he.

~* If I made you "feel" anything at all today, that makes me smile *~
~*~Mysteria ~*~

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