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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-03-03 06:38 PM

(This is for my love Joanna (RosePetal), and how I dream for the summer and possibly being able to meet her for the first time!

My Dream Date
By: Noah Eaton
3/3/02

I've never been on a date, but I know who I want to share my first date with
I want to spend my time with Joanna this summer
She's the one that is always on my mind
She's the girl I love, that I want to spend my life with her for all time

She would come to me, run off the airplane
Where I stand waiting for her in the terminal that magical summer day
I could hold her hand hopping to the baggage claim
Going home with her, starting our romantic getaway

I dream she's leaning her head on my shoulder
She makes me feel as if I'm in Florida with her
I feel like I'm in a tropical paradise, lying with her under the palm trees
We massage each other, kissing each other lovingly

From off the balcony of my house, we could search for pink stars
From my telescope I can show her Venus and Mars
I can take her to the mountains and to the Boulder Mall
Take her out for dancing in the moonlight, have a ball

If luck would have it, maybe Shakira would come to town that same week
I could buy her tickets and take her to the concert of her dreams
During "Que Me Quedes Tu" I could hold her in my arms with bliss
During "The One", I could feel with her loves first kiss

I can take her for a romantic dinner at a fine Chinese restaurant
We can share a platter of our favorite sesame chicken with honey sauce
When we break the fortune cookies to see our message
I wish to love you forever, your love is my eternal wish

Every night before I fall asleep
I think about you and I can't help but weep
I stare at your pictures next to my bed
Your love makes me happy, sometimes I can't fall asleep until 2 A.M

I stare looking at your lovely face
Hoping that I can share this dream date
With you...
And I can forever fall in love with you...
Someday soon...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-03-2002 06:39 PM).]

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-03-03 06:42 PM

Wow Joanna you are really in for a hot time, and you too Noah, you know how to make a girl happy. great poem, great dream and I do hope it comes true. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-03-04 05:44 AM

Everyone should experience their dream date...James

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

3 posted 2002-03-04 08:22 AM

Noah hi there I’m sure all your dreams and Joanna’s will come true. You are two such special people, and obviously in love. This is a very lovely poem and I'm sure your dream date would be a poem of true love.

Well written Noah very well written

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2002-03-04 09:57 AM

Noah darling boy this is outstanding writing, and so full of love, this is such a special and magical wonder. I’m sure all your and Joanna’s dreams come true, no one deserves happiness as much as you two do

What can I say except this is utterly wonderful.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-03-04 10:11 AM

Noah~

I hope this happenes for you both, what a loving heart you always share.....thank you for that....

you always remind me what first love, first kisses, first true feeling, feel like....WOW my friend....

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-03-04 10:40 AM

I know it will be exactly this wonderful, when the time comes. May it happen soon.
Sandra

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2002-03-04 12:07 PM

Awwwwwwwww, oh my gosh, I dream of meeting you this summer too, I want you! Awww, it would be a dream come true to kiss you, I pray too for this, I want you more than anything else in the whole wide world, sweetie! Love you baby!

Love,
your gwenevere

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

8 posted 2002-03-04 03:16 PM

Noah,

Awwwww! This sounds wonderful!! I know you and Joanna will have a lovely time together when you finally get to be together. Very sweet and very romantic my friend

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

9 posted 2002-03-04 06:29 PM

Awwwww!!! Noah, you've got such a talent! I love reading your poems! Joanna is so lucky!

(<>..<>)

Fred says: "I want to kees you... I want to biiite you..."

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

10 posted 2002-03-04 06:36 PM

Hello Noah

I have read many of your poems that show the deep love you have for Joanna and I feel as though I'm reading something straight out of Romeo & Juliet. I wish you both much love and happiness.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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