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It Takes Two(from a long ago challenge)
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It Takes Two(from a long ago challenge) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It always takes two Lightening and rain To create a spectacular thunder It always takes two to make a couple and three to tear it asunder. It always takes two, a child and God to teach an adult to pray. It always takes two, morning and night to create one whole day. It always takes two to start a fight that then becomes a war. It always takes two any two at all to know what we're fighting for. It always takes two a reader and poet to put magic in what we write It always takes two just you and me to do what we think is right. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this flow, from a reader to a poet.  Sandra |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Awesome... I loved this challenge.. All righty - I'll join you...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a different take on "two" very good *s M |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon..you're right..enjoyed this very much! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
And dear poet, it always takes two. the poet and the reader, you are right on that one. and I the reader love this. lovely work. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhh...I love this, sweet friend, this is a wonderful message for every poet and friend! (kiss on cheek) You are a wonderful friend to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is an excellent reply to the challenge! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all!! This was a challenge poem from WAY before these forums. We had just started on the previous forum here at Passions (Old Blue) and I wrote this one at work one day.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well...no matter when this was written..I do believe you did well in your "twos"... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sharon darling girl this is wonderful, I doubt if I could do this but I might give it a try, I’m not promising anything. But I can tell you now it won’t be as good as this. Excellent writing darling girl, your two’s made an outstainding write  Love and warm stuff As always Slushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It always takes two a reader and poet to put magic in what we write =================================== this is very cool...I love the rhyme scheme you chose as well as the analogies. Its both fascinating and impressive to think about how big this forum/site is now when hearing of its early days. And youve been here all along. Thats something to be proud of So it seems your saving grace was only saving face, |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
When I first joined I was terrified and awed by everyone's talent. I never told anyone my real first name in the beginning because I was sure I would only be around for a few months...and here it is, 3 years later! |
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Phaedrus Member
since 2002-01-26
Posts 180 |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
*applause* so very good to read this again..... and so glad that you're still here...... your presence and beautiful words and support have been so wonderful for all of us!!! |
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