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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-03-03 10:47 AM

For The Fallen Angel…..jwesley

I’ve seen angels
with hole worn wings
seen devils
with shiny things
heard of a man who feared
he fell from grace
has the weight of salt
on his tear stained face
mistakes, maybe
he made a few
division caused
from a different view
remember this
through your strife
if someone truly loves you
…they love you for life

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

1 posted 2002-03-03 10:51 AM

This is a beautiful poem.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2002-03-03 11:32 AM

This is so sweet, and those last lines, so true.
Sandra

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-03-03 11:44 AM

Yes, for life! Love isn't a faucet to be turned on and off,
even if the hot water runs cold at times. Great poem!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-03-03 11:47 AM

1slick this is totally awsome, I love this poem, especially as a response to J. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

5 posted 2002-03-03 12:04 PM

clearly, seasoned advice, and so well said.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2002-03-03 12:08 PM

A thougtful gift of words for another. The best gift a poet can give. Very beautiful and true words.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2002-03-03 12:27 PM

Thank you so much for this beautiful write Helen...deeply felt inside of me.

jwesley

Please see...Soul of the Pen...my first thought on reading this from you. Thanks for being my friend.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-03-03 12:30 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, the last lines are so true and explains it all beautifully, I just know James is going to cherish these words forever! (kiss on cheek) You are a true angel, sweet friend, this is a very thoughtful and compassionate poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-03-03 12:38 PM

remember this
through your strife
if someone truly loves you
…they love you for life
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Lovely Helen...and a wonderful response to Jimmy's post.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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