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night renewal |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
during the night her petals soften covered by dew not harsh sunlight that is when the real beauty unfolds when touch becomes the focal sensation Scents mingle with night air sweet honey and the crisp fall cold and by morning her colors are fresh and await the touch of another day |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
James, your poem reminds me of a night blooming crocus. Rare and exotic. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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RavenSnow Junior Member
since 2002-01-30
Posts 16 |
This is nice! Soft, romantic, and I enjoyed your use of imagery and the poem's descriptiveness. RS "A conspiracy of silence speaks louder than words." |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Each day blooms anew...Kewl...  |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This makes me think of the night-blooming flowers that never see the light of day...this is very nice...and I would read more, James... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shine with life and spring! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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