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(Poem) 2:04am
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(Poem) 2:04am |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda 
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2:04am As time passes by this solemn night, my heart wishes thumps of emotions through my body and mind. Yet my soul comforts itself in the recollections of you, As you told of love, care, desire. My night right now is just like the darkness outside. Oh how I wish you would shine your light on me. Thinking of you as my fingers tell the story of my heart. Visions of your eyes through which the beauty of life shines. If only the world would go my way. As tonight I beckon the tides of realities and the winds of actions to follow. Yet, tis not want it ort to be tonight, and I promise that after the sunrise I shall. Missing you, and the closeness of your love embracing mine. Wondering if you're strolling through these same thoughts as I. Moments like this one awakens me to the truth. Like a precious gem washed up on the shore you are to me. I love thee with all my heart. Sleep well till the sunrises. Copyright ©2002 Hayden A. James Suggestions/comments? My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love the title because it shows how true love is timeless and can be felt at any minute, any second, always! (big hugggssssss) I wouldn't change athing, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is beautiful Hayden. Very nicely penned indeed. Lovely thoughts and great imagery. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
haydenjames - well penned write. Just to clarify, no - there are no feelings... BC |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Hayden, this was fantastic!! Keep it up man... Email me too ok?? Talk to you soon, Jeff |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
Thanks! Am... No feelings? what r u refering 2 sorry? :S My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
hayden - I apologize. I thought you had mentioned in reply to one of my poems that it sounded like I still cared for someone. All I wanted to say was I don't...Sorry for any confusion my comment might have caused.... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh how I wish you would shine your light on me. Thinking of you as my fingers tell the story of my heart. Visions of your eyes through which the beauty of life shines. If only the world would go my way. As tonight I beckon the tides of realities and the winds of actions to follow. Yet, tis not want it ort to be tonight, and I promise that after the sunrise I shall. ================================== this is beautiful expressive writing... wonderful mix of emotion and imagery.... the longing in the solitude of night is evidnet. Welcome to Poetry Land poet sir I have sampled some of your other pieces and visited your website...very cool presentation, and congrats on your success with your webmaster biz!! I look forward to more of your work. peace and poetry jm Some find subtlety in strangers, |
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