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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2002-03-02 09:57 PM

Why dost thou torment me this week?
These two days thou hast been in my heart
Eating away and causing this unsureness...
So he loved before me...
Keep thee away Jealousy
I don't want thee here
Keep thy painful claws out of my heart
Thou will do nothing but tear us apart
She made him happy, that's all that matters
Why dost thou care about the past?
What matters is the here and now.
Keep thee away Jealousy
Leave this one alone...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-02 10:01 PM

(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope that either he can understand how you feel for him now or you will find a new happiness that will forever delight you and bid farewell to envy forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I hope all is alright with you now, all our thoughts are with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2002-03-02 10:03 PM

Good thoughts my dear! jealousy will get you down if you let it.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

3 posted 2002-03-02 10:08 PM

Great writing PoetFriend...
*~coco~*

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2002-03-02 10:14 PM

Best write on jealously that I've read in a long time, my friend...very well done.

jwesley

Lia Fail
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since 2002-02-26

Posts 80

5 posted 2002-03-02 10:31 PM

This is beautifuly written. such sentiment in your words. Such a beautiful girl with a beautiful heart and soul. Youv'e nothing to be jealous of. Leave the past where it belongs... in the past. Live in the moment.
I really loved this poem.
Lia

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-03-02 11:22 PM

Slay thy beasts dear maid
For thou are to be saved.
Put thy fears to rest this day
For thee art most brave...
Wilt thee say? Doth thee not know?

Excellent poem...thank you...

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

7 posted 2002-03-10 08:58 AM

He will have done a lot of things before you, Rhonda. Don't be jealous over it.
Stirring and it makes Mr Fantastical come off differently.

Hope you're alright now. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the read.

~AF~

"Sometimes the only way to stay sane is to go a little crazy." - Susanna Kaysen

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-03-10 09:14 AM

Very Good!

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2002-03-10 10:02 AM

Skyfire, this is a heartfelt poem to me. These two lines jumped right out at me.
(Keep thee away Jealousy
Thou will do nothing but tear us apart).
I have had to deal with jealousy, before. So, believe me when I tell you, this last line here is very true. Jeaousy does alot of damage to a relationship. I know!

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