Open Poetry #19 |
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The Saga of Two Willing Hearts |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
There was a great convergence of hearts from far and wide and when everyone was gathered none were left to stand outside. Love stepped up to the podium her beauty took all breath away; her voice was soft and gentle when she began to say.... “Who will accept my offering of Love both generous and kind? Who will open up their hearts to leave emptiness behind?” There rang out a million voices each trying not to be outdone for the gift of Love was sought after by each and every one. Love spread out her hands and smiled and everywhere a hush began to fall She said “I have enough for every heart my gift is free for one and all.” But before she even finished speaking a chill began to fill the air and within that crowded room a figure stood up from his chair. Time raised up his head and spoke in a deep commanding voice “Who is strong enough to stand my test? Which of these hearts will make that choice?” Then Distance stepped out of the crowd, gloating, with a look of pride and adding weight upon the challenge moved to stand at Ol’ Time’s side. “So who’ll defy our declaration? Who’s hat into the ring is tossed? For Time can wither even rocks and because of Distance much is lost” Silence spread throughout the room not a word was spoke, not one; Love sadly watched the soundless crowd sure Time and Distance now had won. But just when those tow’ring figures could almost taste a victory so thrilling they heard two voices from the stillness, both of them said “My heart is willing” Then Love gave her head a gentle nod and instilled her precious gift, for true love withstands the test of time; not even distance can cause a rift. So the two looked in each other’s eyes and shared the gift within each heart then tasted one last lingering kiss, as their fingers gently slipped apart. Then Distance took his powerful grip and Time cast his curse upon them too, but each heart took with it Love's true gift and that's all they need to see them through. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"So the two looked in each other’s eyes and shared the gift within each heart then tasted one last lingering kiss, as their fingers gently slipped apart. Then Distance took his powerful grip and Time cast his curse upon them too, but each heart took with it Love's true gift and that's all they need to see them through." ![]() ![]() ![]() YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I just love happy endings, this is sooooooo beautiful and no matter how long it can be and how far apart two can be, He will always have a plan for all of us and love will come to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jan, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...one of my favorites...James |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is soooo very beautiful.... much enjoyed... |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Beautiful, just beautiful! So sad... so lovely... Thanks for the read!!! (<>..<>) |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
Thanks everybody. ![]() ![]() Jan |
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