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Open Poetry #19

(pathways) of the muse

Streen
Member

since 2001-11-28

Posts 169

0 posted 2002-03-02 06:12 PM

(pathways) of the muse

   it fled one day leaving
pathways
bits of food behind but when I followed
    the breadcrumbs pecked up
       by the harpies' breath and guile
how can one know        the noiseless trail
    maybe the breadcrumbs leave crumbs,
ah to feast on leftovers of others,
    leaves a hungered desire
for the muse within.
        where is the candied house
  containing the wicked witch
     and hansel and gretel stroll about
plucking licorice from the side.
    there, there, is my muse,
I bemuse
    on the side of a candied abode.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-03-02 08:48 PM

That was a very entertaining read. Thanks. Very creatively done.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-02 08:58 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is such a beautiful muse, sweet friend, this makes me hungry, I feel like having some cotton candy or licorice now! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is delightful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Derek, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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