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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-03-02 03:41 PM

My ears were void of hearing
Until you played love's heavenly tune
Now you've given me wings to fly
As I glide on up to the moon

I couldn't even smell the roses
Denied of love - a life of gloom
But then you came along
And all the flowers began to bloom

My eyes had trouble seeing
Until you came and showed me love
Painting a masterpiece on canvas
With our very own sea of love

My heart had trouble feeling
It had been lonely for so long
But you filled it up with love
And now I sing a brand new song

I felt incapable of loving
But you guided me along the way
Within the confines of your heart
Is where I'd like to stay

Suetang

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-03-02 03:44 PM

Sue...what man could ever turn down your
beautiful love poetry.....Surely he swoons
at the sight of your words...Very nice...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-02 03:54 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always sing with loves light and joy! (kiss on cheek) May true love forever breathe life into your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-03-02 04:18 PM

Sue
you are developing a fan club for your romantic poetry. I know I am a fan. This is so soft and loving.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-03-02 04:41 PM

I have never really liked romantic stuff, but I have to say I enjoy reading yours

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-03-02 06:48 PM

I felt incapable of loving
But you guided me along the way
Within the confines of your heart
Is where I'd like to stay

oh Sue do I ever know what these last words
feel like. The entire poem was just perfect.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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