Open Poetry #19 |
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Would You, Could You Write A Poem - Happy Birthday, Dr. Seuss |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... ![]() |
~Would You, Could You Write A Poem~ Poet, poet, listen please I beg of you, I'm on my knees Would you write a poem for me Would you. could you...can it be Would you write it in the rain Would you write of joy or pain Would you write it in a car Would you write about a star Would you write it in the night Would you write about a kite If it made the people look Would you write it in a book Yes, I'd write a poem for you Listen close, here's what I'd do I would write it in the rain I would write of joy and pain I would write it in a car I would write about a star I would write it in the night I would write about a kite If it made the people look I would write it in a book That's wonderful, but tell me true Could you write a poem for two Would you, could you write it slow Could you, would you...I must know Would you, could you write it sweet For my love, a special treat Would you, could you write a sonnet Could you...I'm depending on it. I can write a poem for two Wait and see - you won't be blue I would write it nice and slow I could let the feelings flow I would write it oh so sweet For your love a special treat I would write a perfect sonnet No doubt, you can depend on it Thank you, thank you, poet dear I'm filled with gratitude sincere Now, tell me once or tell me twice Would you write it for a price You are welcome, this is true I will take good care of you I'll tell you once, and maybe twice This poet's words, they know no price I gladly share them now for free To touch a heart, my only fee vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Happy Birthday, Dr. Seuss you were better than Mother Goose you were better than PBJ I would have no better way to say Thanks than to add it here You were my Doctor, dear! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY!!! (giggles in delight) Awwwwwww, the spirit of Dr. Seuss fills your hearty, sweet friend, he was my favorite author when I was a little boy and he is still one of my favorites today! (kiss on cheek) One poems, two poems, short poems, long poems, oh all the wonderful thinks you can think! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, HAPPY BIRRHDAY DR. SEUSS!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I am sure that hearts are touched. For that we thank you very much. We hear that it's a special day To Dr Seuss, here's what we say We'll celebrate for you - dear Doc We'll write all right around the clock We'll honor you with poetry.... I'll have to do the rest on my own poem??.. On a roll now... ![]() |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
vlraynes, This is soooooo great ![]() ![]() Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Terrific!!! I love it! ![]() ![]() |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Delightful, Vicky! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Vicky, I would I could write to you to thank you for your write so true I would thank you on a plane I would give thanks in the rain I would thank you from my car If I could, thanks from a star Dr Suess is honoured here but it's really very clear Vicky is a poet too so I give my thanks to you. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Dr. Seuss I've never met, but you have my dear, I bet. Writing verses oh so sweet, rhyme and meter very neat. Glad I caught you here. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
![]() ![]() this is so great!! i'm gigglin all over me! teehee... ![]() hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I would write a poem for you I would sing it loud and true I would write in in the park I would write it in the dark Maybe it would light a spark Find your heart and hit the mark I would write it there in Phoenix I would write it on a Kleenix You could take what I compose And then you could blow your nose! ![]() |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
LOL@DEER!! ![]() |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
thats so cute..I love it.. "Water Over Matter" |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well, Vicky... I was gonna say you've collected a fee here. *S* But SOME Kleenex toting Balladeer made coherent thought all disappear. *G* So I'll just say... I enjoyed very much! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful, Vicky! I enjoyed this very much! |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awwww Dr Seuss books were always my fav! ![]() |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
You have done it here and now I truly wish you'd show me how A tribute to our Dr. Seuss Now we'll have our apple juice. Within the blue we will read And implant a vital seed A treasure from Vlraynes Can we now play with trains? You have done it here and now All I can offer you is Wow! A thank you from my heart is due Reminding us to eat our stew. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Vicky Dr. Suess is my son's favorite, seriously - and he loved your poem and so did I ![]() ~* If I made you "feel" anything at all today, that makes me smile *~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"'ll tell you once, and maybe twice This poet's words, they know no price" ![]() Bravo Vicki, bravo! This was such a treat to read! You've got me smiling from ear to ear. You've kept to the rhythm of Suess' style with perfection. Just wonderful! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ You little poet you ! Lookee here what you just did sent me scampering like a kid Once again a birthday party thrown I'm so glad my heart's not grown~ I'd really like a poem with SPAM I'll even eat your Green Eggs And Ham If you'll serve it up with rhyme I'll gobble it down ... every time~ ![]() You throw one heckuva party~ ![]() Love you~ *Hugs* ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh I love it Vicky! Excellently done!!! (is excellently a word...?) Wow. You amaze me! Just don't fall in love with me and no one will get hurt |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I absolutely love this. Peaches |
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